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Post by hesonmymind on Aug 15, 2007 3:21:00 GMT -5
wow next chapter already done good girl i cant wait for it to be posted
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Post by chloe on Aug 16, 2007 0:12:22 GMT -5
hehe ill post it 2morow so watch out for it
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Post by aussiegirl on Aug 17, 2007 6:34:44 GMT -5
please update soon!! i love this fic so much
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Post by chloe on Aug 18, 2007 4:34:41 GMT -5
omg im so stupid i thought i posted the next chapter last night far out im silly but im going out now and the next chapter is on the other computer which isnt turned on atm, so as soon as i get home ill post it.
its a large chapter btw as well so watch out- i promise ill actually post it in the next 2 hours
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Post by chloe on Aug 18, 2007 8:15:04 GMT -5
ok so i went over the chapter and i turned it into 2 different chapters becasue they didnt really go well together, so here it it. The controversy and all that is in the next chapter which i will post in a couple of days.
Chapter 24 -Carry On-
“Cindy we need to talk” Teddy said as he let go of my hand and looked down at the ground. It was lunch time and we were alone walking on the oval.
“what about” I asked reaching for his hand, but he pulled away
“its just well….I don’t want to say this because your…… you and I love you…..” he started but then stopped
“but??” I said breaking the silence that had now occurred
“but….I love someone else” he said as he pointed in the direction of a girl with ginger hair, as my stomach dropped
I flung up in bed and gasped really loudly as a tear slid down my face. I quickly grabbed my phone and looked at the time, it was only 3.30am. I sighed with relief as I realized that it was all just a dream, or shall I say nightmare. I laid back down in bed and looked over at my wall that had the picture frame with the pictures of me and Ted, I just smiled. I rolled over as the smile was wiped from my face, and realization hit me- was the dream a sign??, no no Teddy would never do that he’s not the type, but then again I thought that about Kris, but Teddy is different. I sat back up, there was no way I was going to get back to sleep now. I looked over at my window as a slight warm breeze flowed in, and then it settled back down. I got up and went over to my closet. I pulled on a pair of black tights, shoved on a random shirt and put on my uggies, I was going to go for a walk to help clear my head. I tip-toed over to window, where I stepped on my bed then outside on the platform that extended off my window. I climbed down the convenient lattice that extended from the bottom of the bbq area up to the top of the platform and started to walk down the street.
-Carry On- There was no destination that I was heading for but my feet took me towards the park where I hadn’t been in a couple of days. I sat on the swing and let the slight wind that had picked up sway me back and forth. I was sitting in a comfortable silence when my phone started to vibrate, my first initial reaction was ‘crap its Ben or Mat, im in trouble now’ but as I pulled my phone out it showed the number was private. I hate when it s a private number, and usually never picked up but for some odd reason I did tonight.
“hello” I said into my end of the phone as there was no response “hello???” I repeated as I heard heavy breathing on the phone and then it cut out. I was now officially freaked out, so I got up and started jogging towards the road and hopefully back home.
-Carry On- I had now gone from a fast jog to more of a fast power walk. I looked up for the first time the whole trip to realize that I had jogged to Teddy’s house instead of my own. I pulled out my phone to look at the time as a cool breeze blew past which cased my to start developing goose bumps on my arms. I went to speed dial to call Teddy when I realized that it was only 4.00am- not exactly a great time to call someone. I put my phone away and looked up at Teds window, which was just slightly visible from the position I was standing. The light was on and Teddy was sitting on his window sill looking out at the night sky oblivious to the fact that I was standing outside his house on his side driveway. I made my way down the side of his house towards the backyard so I could stand outside his window. I picked up a small pebble that was on the ground and threw it at his window, which it hit and made a small noise. Teddy slowly looked down and saw me in the light that was supplied by the street lights. He had a confused look on his face as he rubbed his eyes, probably to make sure he wasn’t dreaming. After his realization that he wasn’t dreaming he smiled and opened his window and gestured for me to come on up and pointed to the ladder I always used to climb up to his window. I grabbed it and lent it up against his house and climbed up to where Teddy was waiting for me to help me in because the ladder was about a half a meter short of his window. I reached the top and Teddy grabbed me and pulled me up to his room.
“hey babe” I said in a normal tone as if it wasn’t unusual that I was climbing through his window at 4 in the morning.
“hey….what are you doing roaming the streets this later….err early in the morning?” he questioned as he noticed the goose bumps on my arms and pulled me into a hug, that lasted longer than I think we both anticipated.
“I had a terrible dream, and I decided to go for a walk to clear my head, and I ended up here” I said as he let go off my hands which were linked into his and he made his way over to his closet as I went and sat on his bed.
“ tell me about your dream, what was it about?” he questioned looking at me then turned around and started rummaging in his closet
“it was about us actually” I said as he turned around looked at me and made his way over to the bed with his blue hoddie that I loved to bits
“us?” he questioned surprisingly as he handed me the hoddie “here wear this” he added on as he sat next to me and rubbed my arms hoping ide get warm.
“it was terrible“ I started in an upset tone “…we were at school and we were alone on the ovals walking towards our normal spot when all of a sudden you tell me you love me but then turn around and tell me you love some one else and point to some girl with ginger hair” I said as he starred at me with utter shock
“you have got to be kidding me” he said stunned- not exactly the reacting I was looking for
“no I swear it all true” I said
“I had that exact same dream, except you were the one who loved someone else…….and you even pointed to a guy with ginger hair” he said as I became a bit weirded out
“that’s so…….freaky, Teddy is this a sign?” I questioned starting to get a bit worried. I mean its not everyday that you and you boyfriend have the exact same dream about each partner loving someone else.
“a sign meaning what tho…. I mean I love you and only you, and as far as I know you love me and only me…so I don’t see what it could possibly be” he said
“well your right I love you and only you…..but Teddy im freaked out…..maybe it’s a sign of our relationship coming to an end……no that cant be it, it just cant” I said starting to get a bit worked up. This was really starting to get me worry me. Most would ask why I was getting so worked up, but the thing is Teddy was one of the best things that has happened to me and it would kill me if anything were to break the relationship we have, and this dream showed that.
“calm down…im surly not going to end the relationship and neither are you so its no where near coming to an end…..and maybe the dream was just a coincidence and we are just trying to read into something that isn’t there” he said reassuringly and I believed him
“you always have a way of seeing things clearly when I cant don’t you” I said as he started to smile.
“you know it” he said as he laid back on the bed and I laid closely next to him to keep myself warm. It had gotten cold all of a sudden.
“your cold yet you don’t put on the hoddie I gave you” he said with a laugh as I poked his side and he jumped
“well I don’t need the hoddie when I have you to keep me warm” I said as he nodded
“true true you do have a point there” he said agreeing as he leaned in and passionately kissed me
“what was that for?” I questioned after we broke away
“you don’t want me to do it anymore” he said jokingly looking for my reaction
“no no, I love when you do that, it was just……unexpected” I said as he just laughed
“well I just wanted to show you that I love you” he said in a soppy voice
“aww I love you to” I said as I planted on one his lips
“what was that for?” he said mockingly as I poked his ribs and he jumped and turned around and started tickling me
“Teddy….” I said starting to laugh “teddy…stop it” I continued loudly as he stopped
“shhh, my parents room is next door remember” he said sitting up to hear if they had woken up
“sorry…..teddy teddy……stop it” I said in a mock whisper being a smart arse
“oh your such a smart arse” he said as he slightly tackled me down on the bed and kissed me
“yes I am” I replied as he turned the bed side light off and kissed me again… and again as we continued on into the morning.
-Carry On- I woke up that morning with my head lying on Teddy’s bare chest with our arms around each other. I leaned up and kissed Teddy’s cheek and woke him up
“morning sunshine” I said as he started to rub his eyes and looked around the room
“morning” he said with a yawn as he started stretching then recomposed himself back to hugging me and kissed my forehead. I was just about to speak when there was a knock at the door and someone trying to open the locked door
“Teddy…sweetheart…..its time to get up….. and whys the door locked??” Mrs Geiger questioned through the door as I looked at Teddy and Teddy looked at me and we started to panic
“hey mum…. um im up” Teddy said as we both got out of bed in a state of panic
“good….but could you please let me in, I have some of your clothes” she said as I quickly grabbed the rest of my clothes off the floor and ran to the bathroom to get dressed and out of sight, as Teddy went and unlocked the door.
TEDDY POV I ran over to the door and unlocked it after I checked that Cindy was in the bathroom and out of sight. My parents didn’t care if she stayed over but there were certain rules about her sleeping over that they put in place. Like for starters they had to know that she was staying over and the door must be unlocked and open and things like that. It not that they didn’t trust us, but they were just doing what normal parents would do.
“morning mum” I said in a casual tone as I kissed her on the cheek
“morning Teddy-do” she said as I rolled my eyes and she just laughed as she kissed mu cheek. I hated when she called me that, and she knew it.
“oh snap…I wondered where they had gotten to” I said pointing to a pair of jeans that were in my mums hands
“well maybe if you actually cleaned your room and put your clothes away in your drawers or in the wash you may know where some of your clothes are” she said as she raised her eyebrows and I rolled my eyes once again
“mum its to early for lectures” I whined as she laughed
“its never to early to nag your son” she said as she tapped my cheek and handed me my clothes “now go have a shower and get ready for school” she said as she started to walk out the room “and if I come up here again and find that you have gone back to bed, I will lock the studio for a week” she said as I gave her a shocked look which she just laughed at.
“your evil mum” I said with a laugh as she laughed as well and disappeared out of sight. I laughed to myself as I put the clothes on my draws and walked over to my bathroom, where I could see Cindy fixing her hair in the mirror through the slit between the door and the door frame.
“rah” I said as I swing the door open and scared her- I swear I never meant to scare her
“few you scared the heebie jeebies out of me” she said as she tied her hair up with her elastic and turned around
“sorry, I seriously never meant to scare you”
“oh yea sure you didn’t” she said sarcastically
“im serious” I replied as we walked out of the bathroom
“whatever” she replied as she turned around and looked at something on my desk
“oh crap its 7.30 I need to get home” she said as she starting running around my room
“what are you looking for?” I questioned as she got on her knees to look under my bed
“my phone….have you seen it?” she asked as I walked over to my bedside table and picked it up.
“what… this phone?” I asked as she looked up and smiled
“that would be it” she said as she got up and reached for it but I held it up high
“hey” she said still trying to reach for it, as I held it higher and pointed to my cheek.
“kiss first, phone second” I said as she laughed and then kissed my cheek.
“can I have it now?” she questioned as I laughed and gave her the phone.
“thankyou….but I really have to go, if I have any chance of not getting caught” she said as I put my arms around her
“ok” I said as I kissed her and started walking over to my window whilst doing so.
“I guess ill see you at school” she said as she sat on my window sill and swung her legs around out the window.
“aren’t you going with me and Danny?”
“nah I was thinking about walking to school with Lilly” she said as she grabbed onto the sides of my arms and started lowering herself onto the ladder.
“ow ok then, I guess ill see you then…….I love you” I said as she got situated on the ladder and I let go
“love you too” she said as she started to climb down the ladder, but then stopped and started climbing back up it
“what’ the matter?” I questioned
“I forgot to give to give you something” she said as she leaned up and kissed me. “cya Teddy” she said with a laugh as she climbed down the ladder and ran off down the street, singing a song. She was one crazy girl.
hope you guys enjoy
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Post by jessb on Aug 18, 2007 8:23:17 GMT -5
loved it! i can't wait for the next part =]
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Post by hesonmymind on Aug 19, 2007 8:10:27 GMT -5
another amazing chapter they r so cute together and his mum is funny but i wonder what the phone call was about and their dreams that was kinda freaky anyways cant wait for that next chapter
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Post by megan on Aug 19, 2007 11:00:48 GMT -5
that was an awesome chapter. i loved it. post more soon.
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Post by aussiegirl on Aug 20, 2007 2:10:19 GMT -5
eeep... i wonder if it is a sign.. i love this fan fic!! cant wait for the next bitt!!
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Post by peepsinthefreezer on Aug 20, 2007 3:40:07 GMT -5
ah that was wonderful. she stayed the night aye aye. but that dream is seriously freaky i wonder if it is a sign, i hope it isnt tho coz they r just to cute post more soon
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Post by chloe on Aug 20, 2007 8:47:39 GMT -5
thanks guys for all the feedback i love reading what you guys think, and i thankyou for taking the time to read and comment it. the next chapter will be posted on friday because its on the laptop which my brother has taken with him to Tasmania with my dad, so he will b bakc on friday and the chapter will be posted then, so keep an eye out for it.
xoxo
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Aug 20, 2007 22:32:30 GMT -5
OMG i read it and im like..emmma stone? omg but then it was no one that was cute awww she stayed over ohhh i love this fic!
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Post by chloe on Aug 22, 2007 5:19:26 GMT -5
^^haha, i totally forgot that emma was a ranger but the only reason why i wrote about a ginger person was because my sisters bf was over and he is a ranger so i was like ow ill use ginger instead of typical blonde.
anyways the chapter will be up on fri so watch out xox
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Post by hesonmymind on Aug 24, 2007 1:16:30 GMT -5
i believe it is friday cant wait 4 the update
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Aug 25, 2007 6:55:11 GMT -5
Hey its saturday i came on here early friday so i could read but it wasnt up so im like ok i'll go on later but i never did its now saturday night and im now heart broken i got my hopes up.
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