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Post by Durr Its Lizzz on Jul 8, 2007 17:59:15 GMT -5
oh my god. i just read this whole fic. it's amazing. i love it. update when you can! [:
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Post by jessb on Jul 8, 2007 20:52:41 GMT -5
hey guys... sorry it took so long for me to update... little bit of writers block, otherwise i would have posted sooner... so here's the next chapter... hope you like it and feel free to comment if you wish =]
Chapter 32
“Is she…” Teddy started.
“Yep,” Chris said with a smile. “Every time… she never gets tired of it.”
“Oh my,” Teddy sighed as he smiled and looked out the window.
I was running around outside. I love the rain… and dancing in it. I stopped and turned towards the house, motioning for them to join me.
“I’m not coming out there… you’re crazy,” Chris yelled.
I made a pouty face and pointed at Teddy. I motioned with my finger for him to come out with me. By this time it was pouring, and I was drenched from head to toe.
Teddy sighed and stood up as I soon realized he was giving in to me. He slowly took off his shoes and came out the back door after me.
“Isn’t this great!” I yelled as he came across the lawn.
He walked right up to me. “Maybe,” he grinned.
He was just as soaked as I was and only in a matter of seconds. We probably looked like two crazy kids out there in the rain, but it didn’t matter to either of us.
“So what do we do out here?” he asked, slicking his hair back out of his eyes and giving me a mischievous grin.
“Well, I’m usually alone out here… so I dance. But since the company is so good…” I smiled.
Teddy knew exactly what I was talking about as he wrapped his arms around me and pulled me close. Sharing a kiss in the rain… it was just too perfect.
“Alright… enough cliché romantic stuff… let’s dance,” I laughed.
“Yeah, yeah, alright…” Teddy laughed too.
We started dancing around like two little kids… and neither of us could stop smiling. I started thinking, as I seem to always be doing… and I remembered the first time I went over to his house... and the dancing. If it wasn’t for that we probably would never be as close as we are now, and that would be a mistake. All the crap he put me through was worth it compared to how great of a boyfriend he was… well so far, at least.
Suddenly it started thundering and we stared at the lightning that had also begun.
“I think maybe we should head back inside,” Teddy said anxiously.
“Yeah, I think you just might be right,” I sighed.
We walked back inside hand in hand to find Chris still sitting in the porch area with guitar in hand. He shook his head as we walked through the door.
“You two are nuts,” he said, chuckling.
“Maybe, but you wouldn’t have it any other way,” I laughed.
“Good point,” he added. “So do you guys want to change into some dry clothes then? I’m sure I have something Teddy can fit into while we put your clothes in the dryer.”
“That would be great,” I said with a smile. “How about it Tedster?”
“I think I’ll just run home and change… then put these clothes in the dryer over there. No offense Chris, but I’d rather wear my own underwear, thanks,” Teddy laughed.
“Oh right, I forgot that you’d need underclothes as well,” Chris shrugged.
“So I’ll run over there and then be right back,” Teddy added.
“Alright… but don’t forget to use an umbrella when you come back,” I said with a smile.
“Don’t you worry,” he smiled, walking over to me. “I’ll be right back… with an umbrella.”
And with that he kissed my nose and walked over to his house. Okay, more like ran back to his house. Once he left I hurried up to my room to change… it was cold in those wet clothes.
It was only about ten minutes later I was putting my clothes into the dryer when I heard a knock on the door, followed by someone walking in. I smiled as I ran to the door to meet him.
“You came back,” I said while giving him a huge hug.
“Did you really think I wasn’t coming back?” he laughed, hugging me right back.
“I wondered,” I laughed.
“Aww, you know I couldn’t stay away for too long,” he said, pulling away from the hug. “I can’t stay for too much longer though… Mom says I have to finish my chores before dinner, so I can only stay for about an hour.”
“If you really need to leave then go ahead. It’s not like I won’t ever see you again… at least I hope that's not the case,” I said slowly.
“No, I don’t want to leave right away. We still have to work on our little project that we said we were going to start. You do remember don’t you?”
I had completely forgotten that Teddy said he wanted us to try and write a song together. My guess is he figured with the way each of us always wrote that anything the two of us wrote together would naturally end up being something good… that is if we could actually pull it off.
“Of course I remember. Geesh, like I would forget something like that,” I said with a laugh, trying to hide that I really had forgotten.
“Good, you’d better not have forgotten. Shall we get started then?”
“Of course… go grab your guitar and meet me by the piano in the living room… mmkay?” I said questioningly.
“Sure thing,” Teddy said as he nodded his head.
Teddy and I spent the rest of our time together talking, laughing, and playing the guitar and piano.
“So, how should our song start? We need to come up with a melody first,” Teddy started when we were sitting in the living room. He was on the couch with his guitar and some paper to write the lyrics we came up with on. I was sitting at the piano.
“How about this?” I said as I started to play the familiar melody to ‘Dark Blue’ by Jack’s Mannequin. I laughed and spun around when I had finished.
“As much as that is an amazing little chunk of song, I don’t think they’d appreciate it much if we ripped them off,” he laughed. “But props for being able to pull it off... that's some tough stuff right there.”
“Who are you kidding? That’s natural talent, that is… okay maybe I’ve been practicing it for a good month. I’m finally able to play it without messing up,” I laughed.
“Well either way, it was good. But seriously… we need to get down to business. How does this sound?” he said as he walked over to the piano, sat down beside me, and played a little bit.
“It’s good… but how would it sound on a guitar?” I asked playfully as he smiled, shook his head, and walked back over to the couch.
“Like this,” he said as he began to strum a little. “But you keep playing that little bit that I did… okay?”
“Uh, sure uh, thing uh, master Teddy,” I stuttered out.
“Not funny, just do it,” he said laughing.
“I thought you said it wasn’t funny... so why are you laughing?” I smiled.
“It’s not… okay maybe just a little. But you know I don’t like to joke around when it comes to music,” he said like a two year old who was about to throw a temper tantrum.
“Oh alright… but only because I like it so much,” I smiled as I turned around and started to play the same tune he had.
“That’s perfect,” he said.
He began to hum a bit and I could tell he was coming up with something… what it was… that was still a mystery. But before I knew it, it was time for him to leave. We walked to the front porch to say goodbye.
“We’ll work on this later, you promise?” he said with an adorable grin.
“You better believe it, but you’ve gotta tell me what lyrics you’ve already come up with so I can help… because so far it’s completely your song,” I laughed.
“Yeah, yeah I know. I’m thinking about numbers for this one… but anyways, we’ll work on it another time though. I’ll talk to you later Ayerplane,” he said as he gave me a quick kiss.
“Bye Tedster, good luck with those chores,” I said sarcastically.
“Just you wait, your time will come and you’ll have so many chores… and I won’t offer to help then,” he said, turning his head while crossing his arms and pretending to be tough.
“Yeah, my loss I guess,” I laughed. “Now get on home and finish those chores buddy,” I said, making a shooing motion with my hands. “The sooner you get done the sooner you can work on your songs,” I added.
“True. I’ll talk to you soon… oh and I forgot to mention, we, as in my family and myself, are going on vacation next week… actually we’re leaving the day after tomorrow… and we’ll be gone for a week.”
“And you’re just now telling me this?” I said, pretending to be upset. The truth was his mom had mentioned it to my mom the other day and then my mom told me. I knew it was coming all along… just wanted to see how long it would take him to tell me.
“Yeah, well I didn’t know how you’d react and I didn’t want you to get mad so I thought if I dropped it and ran you wouldn’t hurt me too much,” he said as he covered it face with his hands. “Don’t hurt me.”
“Whatever, like I could hurt you… honestly. Have fun,” I said with a smile. “Florida will be great… I just know it.”
“Wait, how did you know…” he started.
“Don’t ask,” I laughed. “Your mom sure does talk a lot,” I grinned. “But that’s what I love about her.”
“Of course she would’ve already told you. But anyway… I guess I’ll see you in a week then… because I know I can’t hang out tomorrow. My mom will be freaking out… I uh, actually haven’t started packing yet,” he grinned.
“You’d better get on that then Tedster. Have a great time… but can I just have one big hug that’ll last me for a week?”
“You sure can,” he said smiling as he wrapped me into a hug. I loved his hugs… they were the best. I always felt so comfy with him, and that made it all too perfect.
“Bye Teddy,” I said as we pulled away.
“Take care Ayerplane,” he said, kissing my nose and walking back to his house. It was so cute how he kept turning around and smiling at me on the way. I was gonna miss that kid… even if it was only for a week.
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Post by smile♥ on Jul 8, 2007 22:06:55 GMT -5
awww... he's going away?? so not cool.
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Post by chloe on Jul 9, 2007 7:17:09 GMT -5
update- yes i love this story and the update was excellent its so cute and funny but i cant believe that he is leaving- but the way he told her and the after reaction was funny anyway tip top update more?
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Post by SiLLySiLLy on Jul 9, 2007 20:42:00 GMT -5
i love it! more??
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Post by Durr Its Lizzz on Jul 9, 2007 23:45:44 GMT -5
amazing. i love it. MORE!
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Post by aussiegirl on Jul 10, 2007 1:14:30 GMT -5
wow you write really well.. i love your style. cant wait for more
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Post by Ally booo yo [= on Jul 10, 2007 22:36:24 GMT -5
i love this! i can't wait for another update
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jul 11, 2007 5:12:15 GMT -5
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love running in the rain ha ha and teddy is soooooooo!!!!!!! cute oh i love this fic , LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!!!
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Post by Kourtni on Jul 11, 2007 22:01:57 GMT -5
This is too cute.
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Post by jessb on Jul 17, 2007 9:09:25 GMT -5
thanks for all your comments guys i've been having a little writers block but i hope to have the next chapter finished tomorrow i'll be working on it today since i don't have to work but it will def. be posted tomorrow =]
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Post by Kourtni on Jul 17, 2007 10:54:40 GMT -5
writer's block sucks...majorly. i hate when i have it. lol. but yeah, can't wait to read more.
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Post by chelsealovested on Jul 17, 2007 22:09:00 GMT -5
hey i loveee this fic...... is teddys official site not working for anyone? it takes me to american rock band?!?!?!
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Post by chloe on Jul 18, 2007 2:21:48 GMT -5
that sucks that u hav writers block but i cant wait till u fin the next chapter
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Post by chloe on Jul 18, 2007 2:23:27 GMT -5
hey i loveee this fic...... is teddys official site not working for anyone? it takes me to american rock band?!?!?! do u mean his actual website, coz its been changed to teddygeiger.com, but if u still go to teddygeigermusic.com then that should still work as well but if ur talking about the official boards then its still working
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