curlykt
Underage Thinker
I thought I loved you. It was just how you looked in the light...
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Post by curlykt on Jan 9, 2007 2:21:04 GMT -5
goodness that was short....but it's cool, ur just increasing the suspense, so now we'll all be even more excited when u post the next chapter.....and I'm deffinitley in suspense here...
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Post by alyssa duhhh on Jan 9, 2007 9:05:06 GMT -5
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh tedddddddddddddy he was totally lookin for her. he can look for me anyday
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Post by smile♥ on Jan 9, 2007 17:01:02 GMT -5
I laughed at Willa and Riles as we closed up the bar the next night. Willa was arguing with him about something that didn't make any sense, but it was funny anyway.
The door swung open, letting in the chilly August air, and we all swung our heads to the door in a perfect synchronized move. "Sorry guys," Hank began, "It's only me. I was listening to the news on the radio and I thought it would be best if I come back in."
I gave him a strange look. "What's going on?"
"Why didn't you tell any of us you were involved in a hostage situation?" He asked curiously. "Your name is Bailey Connorr, right?"
I nodded. "Yeah. How did you find that out?"
"Well, I was listening to the news and they were talking about how these two guys held up a gas station who fit the description of two guys who held up a JCPenney six years ago. Said they killed a young girl name Delia Parker and wounded a girl named Bailey Connor." He explained as my phone began to ring. It was Gran.
"Hey Gran... Ok. Yeah. I'll be home in a few minutes." I was completely baffled. The guys escaped the police just in time. "The police are at my house. I... I have to go."
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They wanted me to testify... Or maybe it was positively identify these guys - I couldn't tell, I was too shocked.
The last thing I remembered before I fell asleep was the policemen thanking me and leaving my house.
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Another day, another trip to Wal-Mart to get school supplies before heading to another night at work. It was all the same. Every night the same drunken people walk in, get drunk and sleep in their trucks. But for some reason, I liked it. I liked to laugh at the ridiculous thoughts and words that came out of people's mouths when they were heavily intoxicated.
After leaving work, I thought it was odd that I was the only one who thought it was odd that Riles hadn't been there all night. I mean, I had told him I wasn't ready for a relationship since I had just come out of one (which wasn't a complete lie). He said he had understood, and agreed that it was also too soon after Felicia (i think that was what he had said her name was) was killed in her accident.
I couldn't find my keys. I knew they had been in the office, where my purse was stored each night, and no one but employees had been in there all night.
"Well well. If it isn't the silly little girl that got her best friend killed," I heard someone from behind me, but I never got a chance to see his face. I was out before I even had a chance to turn around.
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Post by smile♥ on Jan 9, 2007 17:58:17 GMT -5
Oh the suspense... Haha, I know it's killing you! LOL
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Post by Carie on Jan 9, 2007 18:47:55 GMT -5
OMG!!!!!!!!!! no dude thats not nice...at all....more?!!!! soon!
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Post by alyssa duhhh on Jan 9, 2007 21:03:13 GMT -5
ummmmumumumummmmmmmmmmm she's going to die teddy to the rescueeeeeeeeeeeee he needs a cape.
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123456
Step Laddering Up
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Post by 123456 on Jan 9, 2007 21:59:06 GMT -5
teddy is so going to smash a chair over his head [if not the plan...PLEAAAAAASE? THAT WOULD BE SO RAD!]
i love thisssss
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Post by smile♥ on Jan 9, 2007 22:30:56 GMT -5
Haha! Thanks guys! I may have some chair smashing done by Teddy, but it may not be over someone's head... Maybe just as a little comedic relief??? Possibly!! So tonight, I feel like CRAP + I have to read for Psychology tomorrow or I'll feel like I did last semester & I most definately don't want that to happen... So I will update sometime Tomorrow, maybe before I go to school if I wake up early enough!! I'm SOOO glad all of you like it!!! Thanks for the replies everyone!!!!
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Ally booo yo [=
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these our the trappings of our years♥
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Post by Ally booo yo [= on Jan 10, 2007 0:56:58 GMT -5
BAHHA CHAIR SMASHING. =D ohh man.. i have a feeling i know who the person is now.. and who riles is... ohh snapp.
"Well well. If it isn't the silly little girl that got her best friend killed," I heard someone from behind me, but I never got a chance to see his face. I was out before I even had a chance to turn around.
yeah i deffentitly have the chills now. i keep looking behind mee. hahah
cant wait for another update =] your fanfics are AMAZING jamie.
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Post by live.love.laugh on Jan 10, 2007 2:04:10 GMT -5
OMG!!! you're kidding me!!!!! that was way too short!!! i need more!!!!ahhh!!
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Post by [[ariane]] on Jan 10, 2007 14:26:30 GMT -5
I need moreeee. i wanna know whats going to happen.
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Post by smile♥ on Jan 10, 2007 23:16:18 GMT -5
I didn't know where I was. I had a splitting headache and I couldn't move without being in extreme pain. I was surprised that my hands and feet weren't bound together, and they had just left me lying in a room on top of an empty mattress.
"Hello?" I called as I laid there without moving. No one answered me. These people were pretty disorganized to just leave me here without being tied up. "Hello!?" I yelled louder this time, but still no answer.
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"Willa Parker?" A tall police officer asked as he walked up to the bar the next afternoon.
"Yeah." She said nervously. She wasn't sure why they were in here. She was almost positive no one had gotten hurt the night before.
"Do you know a Bailey Connor?"
"Yes, she works here. She's supposed to come in at four today." She informed them, but they just shook their heads.
"She's missing." The man, Officer Moore, told her. "Her Grandmother called us last night when she didn't show up, and then this morning we got a tip from a guy... A guy who most likely would've committed the crime.
She shook her head in disbelief. "Are you sure? I mean, usually Riles walks out with her and... Oh man... He wasn't here last night..."
"So you think he may have done something?" She shook her head vigorously.
"No, no. He was a nice guy. They went on a date, but she told him she didn't want any relationship right now."
They wrote his name down anyway. "What about anyone lurking around?"
"Well, one night a guy came in looking for her and she wasn't here... His name was Teddy. In fact, he lives in the apartment down the hall from me."
"Thank you," He said as he nodded his head as he turned to leave.
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Cristina
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I don't wanna wake up if I'm dreaming!
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Post by Cristina on Jan 10, 2007 23:25:41 GMT -5
woah!!! that's intense! ahh Teddy! i don' t think he commited the crime though. hmm...I'm thinking it was Riles. this is sooo good. more please! ;D
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Post by live.love.laugh on Jan 10, 2007 23:34:47 GMT -5
ahhh!!! more! please
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curlykt
Underage Thinker
I thought I loved you. It was just how you looked in the light...
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Post by curlykt on Jan 11, 2007 2:21:33 GMT -5
Oh geez now the cops think Ted is a hardened criminal! ah! wouldn't that be awesome if he saved the day? and yah, I don't trust Riles...then again, what about Mr. Cheater? he could be in on it...ok my brain does this alot and tries to look for any possible person....ooooo I can't wait to read more!!
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