Post by faith18 on Nov 27, 2006 19:06:57 GMT -5
Hey I am new to these boards, but I recently read "Comfortable" and "Home Life" and I absolutely loved them! I got inspired to write one of my own! So here is the first chapter, I hope you all like it!
Chapter 1:
There I was, one of the first four people sitting in class 20 minutes early. I had only come so early for fear that I might not find a seat. Boy, was I ever wrong. It was so quiet you could probably hear a pin drop. Eventually as more time passed the seats began to fill up. Now the clock read one minute till 9 o'clock. I was so focused on the clock that I hadn't noticed someone had taken the seat next to me. Before I had a chance to see who it was I was startled by a loud, booming voice.
"Good morning and welcome to Psych 101! My name is Mr. Towns, and I am looking forward to an excellent semester with all of you!"
"He seems enthusiastic" the voice next to me whispered. For the first time I turned to see who was sitting beside me. He introduced himself, "hi, I'm Teddy." "Natalie" I replied.
The next hour and a half went on with Mr. Town's enthusiasm. As the class packed up to leave Teddy turned to me and asked, "so are you a freshman here?" "Yeah I'm dorming here, but I am from L.A." "How about you?" I asked. "I am too, but I came here from New York." "That's cool" I said. "I have really got to hurry out of here though. I have work in 30 minutes." "Alright, see you next class!" he yelled to me as I jogged out of the room. "See ya!" I yelled back.
It is kind of short, but I have a few more chapters already done. I will post more later. I would like to hear what you guys think of it so far.
Chapter 1:
There I was, one of the first four people sitting in class 20 minutes early. I had only come so early for fear that I might not find a seat. Boy, was I ever wrong. It was so quiet you could probably hear a pin drop. Eventually as more time passed the seats began to fill up. Now the clock read one minute till 9 o'clock. I was so focused on the clock that I hadn't noticed someone had taken the seat next to me. Before I had a chance to see who it was I was startled by a loud, booming voice.
"Good morning and welcome to Psych 101! My name is Mr. Towns, and I am looking forward to an excellent semester with all of you!"
"He seems enthusiastic" the voice next to me whispered. For the first time I turned to see who was sitting beside me. He introduced himself, "hi, I'm Teddy." "Natalie" I replied.
The next hour and a half went on with Mr. Town's enthusiasm. As the class packed up to leave Teddy turned to me and asked, "so are you a freshman here?" "Yeah I'm dorming here, but I am from L.A." "How about you?" I asked. "I am too, but I came here from New York." "That's cool" I said. "I have really got to hurry out of here though. I have work in 30 minutes." "Alright, see you next class!" he yelled to me as I jogged out of the room. "See ya!" I yelled back.
It is kind of short, but I have a few more chapters already done. I will post more later. I would like to hear what you guys think of it so far.