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Post by beckitaann on Aug 28, 2006 8:09:12 GMT -5
Please update, its really good so far!!!
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these our the trappings of our years♥
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Post by Ally booo yo [= on Aug 28, 2006 22:16:44 GMT -5
yes please update it sooonn! i love it!
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Post by live.love.laugh on Aug 29, 2006 23:13:36 GMT -5
Thank you all for the comments! hehe! heres a little more
I walked up the driveway to my house. It was a pretty nice house not to big but not really small either. I noticed that my dads car wasn't in the garage. GOOD! I entered my house and went straight up to my room. I pulled out my loads of homework and started working on it...
A few hours later I heard a car door slam. great my dad was home!
"WHERE THE HELL HAVE YOU BEEN?" he screamed at me as he slammed open my bedroom door.
"dad what are you talking about? I came straight home after cheerleading practice" i said calmly not trying to upset him more.
"CHEERLEADING PRACTICE? I DON'T BELIEVE YOU" he yelled as he got right up in my face. I could smell the alcohol reaking off of him and his breath. he pulled me out of the chair and dragged me out of my room. It hurt so bad but there was nothing i could do.
He stopped in the bathroom and stood me up infront of the long mirror. "NOW LOOK AT YOURSELF! DO YOU LOOK LIKE A CHEERLEADER? YOU DON'T HAVE BOOBS, YOU'RE NOT TALL, AND YOUR NOT PRETTY ENOUGH. NOW COME UP WITH A BETTER EXCUSE OF WHY YOU WEREN'T HERE"
I began to cry" daddy... I am a cheerleader... and I was at practice" I said barely above a whisper.
"YOU'RE CRYING!! GREAT MY DAUGHTER IS A HUGE BABY AND ALSO A LIAR! I THOUGHT I THAUGT YOU BETTER THEN THAT!" he slapped me across the face which only made me cry harder.
"COME ON YOU BABY LETS GO!" he yelled as he shoved me out of the bathroom and into a closet. "IM TIRED OF HEARING YOU WHINE" he then picked up one of his working boots and hit me in the head with it really hard.
"daddy.... stop... plea........" I was knock out.
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I woke up again with a horrible headache but only this time I was in a closet. My face felt wet and tasted like blood. I slowly got up and went to the bathroom and look into the mirror. My nose had been bleeding. I hopped in the shower and then got ready for school.
I made my way into the kitchen to find my dad reading the news paper.
"Good morning honey! Where have you been? You weren't in your bed this morning when I got up." my dad greeted me niceley.
"I didn't feel like sleeping in my bed!... So I uh slept in the closet! You know to try new surrounding." I lied. He just gave me a confused look then nodded his head.
"Would you like some oatmeal? I made some brown sugar/maple!" he pointed to the stove.
"Yeah sure why not." i sat down at the table as he made me a bowl. I loved my dad in the mornings. He was normal.
I ate my bowl of oat meal and had a conversation with my dad about school and cheerleading.
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"Where have you been?" Tay asked me as I walked up.
"Talking to my dad. Why?" I asked her. She looked really excited about something.
"Sadie and Ted just had this huge fight and of course Sadie had to make a big scene. It was amazing."
"What was it about?"
"Something like he doesn't know how to take hints about when she wants things. I don't know but it was great!"
"Dang I have to miss all the good stuff!" we both laughed
"Did you ever figure out wher that bruise came from?" she asked me as her face went from happy to curious/concerned.
"No. I'm not worried about it. I probably just ran into something or like Heather Sinclare isn't catching me right. Her like hand has been jabbing into my arm when they catch me"
"That might be it" she said but i could tell she didn't believe me.
Whatcha think? and sorry its short i'm getting tired!
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Post by alyssa duhhh on Aug 29, 2006 23:46:04 GMT -5
weeeeeeeeee that was good but like woah.  my biological father used to do that to me. :[ |
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Post by live.love.laugh on Aug 30, 2006 0:00:11 GMT -5
^^ i'm really sorry!
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Post by Kourtni on Aug 30, 2006 6:10:45 GMT -5
it was good.
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Post by smile♥ on Aug 30, 2006 9:48:56 GMT -5
OMG!! Heather Sinclair!!! Degrassi.. hahaha.. i love it!! keep posting more.. it's like her dad has some kind of psychological disorder where he's got like some kind of split personality and doesn't remember he's doing anything.. LIKE SYBIL!! that's such a good movie..
sorry.. yeah.. IT'S REALLY GOOD.. POST MORE!!
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Post by dancingteddylover on Aug 30, 2006 10:39:16 GMT -5
sybili love that movie its really good post mire soon
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Post by [.j.a.i.m.i.e.] on Aug 30, 2006 10:47:00 GMT -5
soo good  i can't wait to see waht happens next! |
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Post by crazy4teddy15 on Aug 30, 2006 12:09:36 GMT -5
good! post more!
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MetTeddy<3
Air Dried
*.. You're So Unpredictable But Still You Know Just What Your Gunna Do <3
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Post by MetTeddy<3 on Aug 30, 2006 14:50:28 GMT -5
sweet keep going!
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Post by Carie on Aug 30, 2006 17:02:26 GMT -5
sooo good!!!!!!!!!
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MetTeddy<3
Air Dried
*.. You're So Unpredictable But Still You Know Just What Your Gunna Do <3
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Post by MetTeddy<3 on Aug 31, 2006 7:57:30 GMT -5
omg, this is really deep and I literally cried so much because, my boyfriend does that to me and it is a terrible thing that people shouldn`t have to go through.
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Post by beckitaann on Aug 31, 2006 12:49:15 GMT -5
please update soon!!!
metteddy, have you told anyone that your boyfriend does that? you should tell someone, so he doesn't continue. i really hope you take that into consideration.
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MetTeddy<3
Air Dried
*.. You're So Unpredictable But Still You Know Just What Your Gunna Do <3
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Post by MetTeddy<3 on Aug 31, 2006 13:11:31 GMT -5
the name`s Sarah and yeah I`ve told someone. They are trying to do something about it.
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i can't wait to see waht happens next!
