jmlove
Step Laddering Up
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Post by jmlove on Mar 26, 2007 21:40:14 GMT -5
great chapterrr and i can not wait for their date =]
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curlykt
Underage Thinker
I thought I loved you. It was just how you looked in the light...
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Post by curlykt on Mar 27, 2007 0:47:07 GMT -5
ooo I'm excited! I can tell this is going to be a very important date!! eee! lol great chapter!
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Post by jessb on Mar 27, 2007 6:36:07 GMT -5
Awesome! Their date's gonna be good... I can feel it More soon please!
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Post by Carie on Mar 27, 2007 17:14:18 GMT -5
ahh i love it. more?
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Post by xtedheadx on Mar 27, 2007 17:37:14 GMT -5
That was so good
I loved it!
More Please
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Post by Kourtni on Mar 28, 2007 10:23:31 GMT -5
ahh...i cannot wait for more!
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Post by live.love.laugh on Mar 28, 2007 12:28:02 GMT -5
soo cute!! they just have to get together!!
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Post by Kourtni on Mar 28, 2007 14:34:32 GMT -5
soo cute!! they just have to get together!! that's what i'm screaming! lol.
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Post by smile♥ on Mar 28, 2007 22:36:06 GMT -5
"So I thought about going bowling, but that's really not as much fun with just two people as it is with a group. Then I thought about a movie, but then I thought there wouldn't be any time to just talk." Teddy was rambling to me in the car. He was so cute when he rambled. "So I though I would ask you what you would like to do?"
"Well, I'm in the mood for a milkshake," I suggested. "We could get milkshakes and then go sit in that park. You know, the one we went to a few months ago?"
He smiled and agreed, just as we passed a Baskin Robbins.
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I couldn't stop laughing at the thought of myself lying in the position I was currently in. I tripped over a rock, causing myself to trip and fall onto the ground and get covered in wood chips in the process.
Teddy held out his hand to help me up and smiled. "Good thing I was carrying your shake."
I continued to giggle at myself and nodded as we walked to the swing set and took a seat.
"So I pretty much brought you here because I wanted to talk to you." He said after taking a long, nervous breath.
"Ok," I giggled.
"I... have these feelings for you."
I gave him an odd look. "I have feelings for you... too."
"No, I mean, like, you mean a lot to me."
I nodded. "Right, you mean a lot to me too. It's basically like you saved me from dying. You are the first guy I've ever not been a hundred percent shy around and the first person I told the truth about my Dad, because I trust you... A lot."
"I guess, what I'm trying to say is that I want you to be my girlfriend." He looked back at me like a little kid that wasn't sure of what he'd just done.
"Well what I'm saying is that i would like for you to be my boyfriend."
"Really?" He let out a breath, like a million bricks had just been lifted off him.
I nodded. "Really."
He smiled as he leaned in to give me a quick kiss on the lips. It was small, but perfect.
"What do you say we head back and surprise everyone with our bravery and new relationship?" He asked and I giggled.
"Bravery?"
"You have no idea," he laughed. "I was nervous, man."
I giggled as he stood up and held out his hand.
"Ok, Teddy. Let's go."
I gave him a big smile as I took his hand and returned to the car.
My life took a bunch of turns that year, but when it finally got better - and I thought it couldn't get any better - it did...
...Thanks to Ted.
>>END.
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jmlove
Step Laddering Up
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Post by jmlove on Mar 28, 2007 22:46:16 GMT -5
awww adorableee. this was such a good story im sad its over thoo =[ but i hope to see more fantasmiccc ones in the near future =]
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Post by jessb on Mar 29, 2007 5:45:49 GMT -5
Amazingly awesome fic! Sad to see that its over though
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Post by Kourtni on Mar 29, 2007 8:27:48 GMT -5
Awesome fic. Sad to see that it's over, but it's still awesome! Great job =)
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Post by live.love.laugh on Mar 29, 2007 13:05:47 GMT -5
perfect ending!!
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curlykt
Underage Thinker
I thought I loved you. It was just how you looked in the light...
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Post by curlykt on Mar 30, 2007 0:27:08 GMT -5
aw I liked it! =D SOOOOO good....and a nice ending!
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Post by Carie on Mar 30, 2007 16:16:50 GMT -5
ahh that was sooooo good!
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