teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 15, 2007 21:24:50 GMT -5
^^OMG!! thanks you, your so kind wow thankz
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teddyownsmyheart
Underage Thinker
I'll be the grapes fermented,Bottled and served with the table set in my finest suit Like a perfect
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 15, 2007 22:44:22 GMT -5
"i'd get teddys too show you somthing he's written but he's way too shy" the guy whispers too you
"whats your name?"
"sam.. why?"
"just wondering, so he's shy because.." you look at sam rolling your hands
"i think he thinks he's crap or something i dont realy know he just doesnt like showing anyone else appart from us and his family realy" he sighs fiddling with his guitar strings
"well you wonna show me something then?" you look at him and smile, he smiles back and begins to strum a beat
Your stayed there till about 10 it was so fun they were all showing you all these kinds of part songs they had written and all the beats and things it was nice to chill with them but teddy's shy-ness stays strong ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Then next morning
your mum comes in like she does every morning leaving a glass of oj and opening your curtains
you slowley wonder into the kitchen
"Dad guess what i woke before this morning" ben says scoffing down his break fast "looks like someones getting lazy" he pokes out his tounge "and dad guess who was out with her BOYFRIEND! last night" ben says in a girls voice
"ben shut up" you sit down at the table giving him a whole bunch of evil eyes
"boyfriend, no she doesnt have a boyfriend, right, no boyfriend no, no boyfriend" he says eyes widened
"what dad? ha no i wasnt out with my boyfriend lastnight" you laugh at your dad
"what your father means to sya is tell us don't hide it" your mum interupts
"yeah thats what i mean but no boyfriend right? "you dad looks at you again
"ha ha not as of now no" you giggle
"ben your walking this morning" wour dad shoots at ben
"i don't mind erin myras walks my way" been says looking into space
"right.. why else would you chose to walk to school" you say under your breath "you know what mum im not hungry im gonna dordle to school
"well ok dont forget tonight's adam's family is comming for dinner" she smiles handing you your phone "and when you get home can you take ollie for a walk, a long walk" she flashes a smile before procedding to finish whatever she was doing in her bag
you run over to your dad and gove him a kiss before walking out the door you take out your bestfriend, mr i.pod and plug him in your ear. as your walking you drift in your thoughts
thoughts about nothing at all just life in general, not that your life was realy a thrill but you fif anyways.
you find your self almost runing into 3 cars and a wall and figure every one who had seen probally thinks your a fruit cake but it didnt bother you
"hey audraa" hayley says runing up to you as you both walk up the school stairs
"hey hayley whats up" you says to her pulling out your ear phones from your ears
"um well adam just called me said he saw your identical twin when he was driving past she looked like she was in a trance... are you ok?" she pats your shoulder
"yeah my identical twin is evil... of course im fine" you laugh
"yeah your right that was a little stupid" she laughs
"so how was your evening lastnight" you say as you both walk trough the hall way
"oh mine was a blast... not realy BUT i herd from a little birdy that you were haning with teddy last night.. i thought you were you know, all about the he's interesrting from far away you get close and the intrest dissapers or something or other" you says as she opens her locker
"no i, it was weird"
"weird as in good or weird as in too! weird?"
"weird as in weid, i dunno we hung out me him and his friends i dunno, there music, this guy sam said that teddys realy good and that he thinks teddys gonna be famouse on day"
"your into him agen huh.. well tell me more"
"nothing realy else to tell turns out katie realy DOESNT like me and stuff and yeah i had a blast his friends and him are like in a band together"
"there in a band cool and i always new that katie never realy liked you" she laughs
"yeah i guess i dont need her i'v got the best 2 best friends in the world"you say to hayley in a baby voice -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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teddyownsmyheart
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I'll be the grapes fermented,Bottled and served with the table set in my finest suit Like a perfect
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 15, 2007 22:51:58 GMT -5
I gotta go when i get back im gonna write somemore
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Post by jessb on Jun 16, 2007 4:31:04 GMT -5
loved it! more soon please!
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chloe
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Post by chloe on Jun 17, 2007 6:14:40 GMT -5
loved the updates its got a heaps good storyline i cant wait for the next chapter
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teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 23, 2007 8:45:32 GMT -5
ok so im sorry i updated inlike forever but i just got wireless so i should be alright for a wile so what was i up too oh right yeah ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
So the next few days went by and nothing realy happend the whole week was basicly boring as you'v started a new path home figure your ipod would rather you keep away from fast walkers expecting phone calles and weird brothers pluse this way adam could get home quicker if he walkes with you and because your taking this new rout he walkes with you most days anyway its friday night... you know those friday nights were you live in a small town out side of a larger town so all the people that you should be spending this fridaynight with live and yes im talking about pittsford.
your on msn but watching tv at the same time its a skill that only the lonleyest of lonleys on friday night can do and you have mastered
hayley says: So im sorry we couldnt hang out
Audrey says: Nah dont worry about it.. no problem theres this realy good episeode of gilmore girls on
hayley says: watching tv and IMing again
audrey says: yeah i think im gonna up grade my skills and go get some food to munch on brb
hayley says: ok
hayley says: oh by the way little guy and his band you know the one who lives 2 streets from you yeah he was looking for you at lunch i just remeber cause an add for teddy bears just came on
audrey says: what teddy was looking for me?
hayley says: yeah at lunch
hayley says: ........
audrey says: sorry tv um why?
hayley says: i dunno i think cause you got that whole history thing you gotta do i gave him your number he didnt call did he?
audrey says: nah he didnt call ohh yeah i forgot we had that to do
hayley says: yeah hey i gotta go cousins from sussex are here with there english accsents but uhh we should hang out tomorow so i dont develop their accsents and drive you crazy too lol
audrey says: ok call me later or what ever cya xx
hayley appears offline!
you swing around in your chair and jump onto your bed
"im sorry mr tv you have my full attention" you say to your self realising what you just said
as there is a knock on the door
"ben i dont want to see your"guns" ok go away" you yell at the door consentrating on the tv
"its not ben and i dont have a gun or guns"
"what the" you whisper to yourslef as you walk to your door you open it to find a tall firgure standing there.. dark haired has amazing eyes
"teddy?"
"hi i wanted to come see when you you had time to ahhh work on that assignment" he says looking at his shoes
"im free now you got it with you" you open the door
"um nah i gotta get back me and sam are recording this new track song"
"alright well um if your free tomorow afternoon you can come over or whatever"
"your not busy?"he looks up at you
"nah i probally wont be"
"ah if your not busy you can come to myine cause the whole assignments there and.. theres this thing sam said he wants your opinion on" he scratches the back of his head
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teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 23, 2007 8:45:56 GMT -5
more comming up
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Post by chloe on Jun 23, 2007 9:07:34 GMT -5
nice i loved the update i wonder what sam needs her opinion or is Teddy lying and he really wants her opinion
post more soon
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teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 23, 2007 9:18:39 GMT -5
"alright im in i'll come over around 3 is that alright"a smile creeps across your face
"ok i'v gotta get back but i'll cya then" he says trying to hide his smile too
"cya" you see as he turns and walks down your stairs
you close your door "that was weird" you say smiling to your self ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- there a knock on the door you faintly hear it as you roll over
"morning" hayley says walking over to your bed
"morning" you say in a corkey tone
"i'm over family why cant you be my family?" hayley pulls open your curtains
"aw that so sweet"cousing to clingy huh" you reply slowley siting up in your bed
"yeahh they never use to be but i guess they changes with age" you sighs "what you wonna... i know lets go shopping"
"you always want to go shopping" you sigh
"duhh im a girl.." she states
you laugh "lets just urg sleep" you lift your quilt over your head
"lets not, lets get out of the house lazy bum" she pulls the quilt of a you -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
im gonna finish this later cause im gonna fall asleep
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teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 23, 2007 9:21:04 GMT -5
i think im gonna write a little more before i go to bed
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chloe
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Post by chloe on Jun 23, 2007 9:26:37 GMT -5
nice...........another chapter but im so much like hayley haha but darn it i feel like going shopping now
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teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 23, 2007 9:51:44 GMT -5
"did whats his face call about the assignment?" hayley says as you and hayley drop all your bags on your floor she finally convinced you that you wanted to go shopping as your shoes an close wanted more shoes and cloths friends and she told a cute little story you couldnt resist saying yes
"did who say what?... AWW teddy what time is it?"
"um 5 past 3 why"hayley looks at you confused
"oh teddy came over and we agreed i'd go over and work on the assignment with him at 3"
"oh right well are you gonna go?" she picks up her bags again
"well i guess you dont mind im kinda ditching you"
"no your not ditching me... comeone lets go" she says to you, you grab your phone and walk out ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- you knock on the door of teddys house awaiting for an answer the door opens and a woman you assume is teddys mum answers "hello" the lady askes
"hey um is teddy here?" you ask
"Yeah sure sam and teddy are in the basement"
"oh ok" you answer she leads you into the large sized house and down the stairs to the basement
"teddy you have a guest"she yells she smiles at you and walkes back up the stairs
"hey audrey" teddy yells
"hey teddy" you reply there like a minute silence
"are you gonna hide forever?" you ask looking around
you hear faint giggles
"well ok im cool with that this coutch looks pretty comfy" you say laughing still standing there
he pops his head out the door "ok" pops his head back around again
you wonder over there, find them siting in a room with all sorts of instraments 2 acoustic guitars and a key board and bass
"wow is all yours" your eyes light up
"yeah except that" he points to the guitar sams holding
"oh yeah whats this thing you wanted to show me" you sit down on an empty chair
"this thing?" sam asks you looking confused
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Post by jessb on Jun 23, 2007 12:28:12 GMT -5
LOVED THE UPDATES!! so glad you finally updated it... it's been awhile anyways... great updates and i know you just posted, but more soon please!
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teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 26, 2007 1:58:25 GMT -5
"oh right well its a song with out words you couls call it a wordless song i guess"
He plays a pretty cool song yest admited he messes up a few times but its realy good
"so what did you think" he ask puting his guitar on the floor
"wow uh that was amazing" you say looking stunned
"thanks" he sighs
"no problem uh my ipoinion...amazing" you giggle
"teddy how come you dont write and stuff, it would be cool if yuou did i mean look at all this stuff you got.. wow" you say knowing perfectly well he does write.
"well i kind of do... a little not realy" he looks down
"oh your embarresed.. well ok dont worry about it" he looks up at you you smile at him giving the its ok i understand look
"well we were thinking of you know actually properly forming a band because well we have all we need and we were thinking if you wanted to be like our kinda tell us if you like it kind of person" sams asks with an usuring smile
"Sure sounds like fun!" you laugh
a few hours went by like nothing and we forgot all about the assignment but i guess thats what happen when your having fun you talk about lotts of stuff manly music your music taste are kinda alike not exacly the same but heeps of the same bands and stuff its realy kool when you find people like that were you can just talk about music with them makes it even more fun ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ you get home at about 10 you take a nice warm shower and hit the hay was a fun staurday.
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teddyownsmyheart
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I'll be the grapes fermented,Bottled and served with the table set in my finest suit Like a perfect
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jun 26, 2007 2:09:01 GMT -5
crap chapter i know
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