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Post by foryouiwont18 on Mar 24, 2007 11:11:18 GMT -5
so im just going to re-write the chapter. i should have it up in the next hour.....maybe.
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Ally booo yo [=
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these our the trappings of our years♥
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Post by Ally booo yo [= on Mar 24, 2007 11:41:05 GMT -5
yayy! cant wait
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Post by foryouiwont18 on Mar 24, 2007 13:20:05 GMT -5
Teddy sat down to the piano and began to play a song.
I kissed the rain I wated up Youre poring dragons in my cup Done trying I cant cope with it Well get over it Yeah im over it
With each note and word he put more feeling into it.
How was I supposed to know You never told me baby What you want I can't read your mind You never bothered to look Inside of mine
I used to wake up every morning And all I could do was think of you It was all a lie It was all a lie
She really broke his heart.More than anything I wanted to mend it
"Wow. Teddy that was amazing." I said once he finished. "Oh it was nothing." He said blushing and scratching his neck."Ive been working on it for a while now" "Its not nothing.....its .....its," I was lost for words.
"Teddy! Mrs. Geiger yelled down the stairs. "Yeah?" He yelled right back "Whatever happened to you doing the dishes?" "Oh.yeah.right. comming!" We walked up the stairs
"Chloe! Mrs. Geiger exclamed pulling me into a hug. "I thought I saw your car outside. How are you?" "Oh Im doing fine." I said. "How are you?" "Well I would be doing better if some people did as I asked" She said playfully swatting Teddys back. "Hey Im getting to it. Plus Chloes going to help so its going to go alot faster." He said throwing me a sly smile. "Sure if by helping you mean sitting here doing nothing." I said throwing the same smile back. Mrs. Geiger laughed. Teddy gave me the evil eye. Mrs. Geiger grabbed some papers and left the room. I sat down at the table while Teddy started the dishes "Hey Teddy." I said. "Yeah?" "Have you ever noticed that when you get your hands wet to start doing the dishes youre nose starts to itch?" I asked. Teddy sighed I watched him.
His nose started to twich. I giggled.
"Im going to kill you!" Teddy laughed as he sprayed me with water. "Hey!" I yelled and chased him into the livingroom.
I pinned him to the couch and tickled his sides. "Stop!" Teddy screamed. "You started it!" I laughed. "Whats so funny now. Huh Ted? "Whats going on in here!?" I heard someone yell. My dancing fingers came to a hault
I turned around to see Mrs. Geiger standing with her hands oh her hips. "This must be a new way of doing the dishes that im unfamiler with." She said trying not to laugh. "Sorry Mom. I'll get right to them."
"Oh your going to get it later!" He whispered in my ear as we walked back to the kitchen.
"Whatever" I laughed.
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Post by jessb on Mar 24, 2007 15:02:38 GMT -5
I can't get enough of this fic!!
Post more soon please!!!
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Post by Kourtni on Mar 26, 2007 15:52:01 GMT -5
Loved it. Cannot wait for more. <33.
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curlykt
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I thought I loved you. It was just how you looked in the light...
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Post by curlykt on Mar 27, 2007 0:49:16 GMT -5
hee hee, i like this story! it's cute! more please! =D
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chloe
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Post by chloe on Apr 4, 2007 1:31:47 GMT -5
awesome fan fic i luv it..............more please
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Post by foryouiwont18 on Apr 20, 2007 23:37:18 GMT -5
I was driving home when my cell phone rang. I looked at the caller id. It was Teddy. "Hello?" I answered. "Are you home yet?" He asked. It sounded like his mouth was full. "Ted, I just left your house!" I lauged. "Oh. Yeah. Ok bye." He hung up before I could say anything. I chuckled as I put the phone down. It rang again. "Hello?" "Are you home yet?" "Ted!!" I giggled "Right. Yeah. Sorry. Too much sugar. I'll call you when you get home." "How do you know.." I began but he hung up. "That kid!" I laughed to myself
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As I walked into my front door the house phone rang. "Good timing Geiger." I picked up the phone as I threw my purse onto the couch. "So im thinking..." Teddy said. "We should totally go do something crazy tonight." "What'd you have in mind?" I asked I could almost see him smiling over the phone.
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Post by jessb on Apr 21, 2007 8:38:18 GMT -5
loving the update! more soon please
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Post by Kourtni on Apr 26, 2007 6:11:44 GMT -5
love the update. cannot wait for more.
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Post by ohhh ashley on May 7, 2007 18:27:58 GMT -5
awe, this is real good :].
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livelife
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"live life no regrets for the day passes and the moments set."
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Post by livelife on May 8, 2007 1:50:14 GMT -5
soo good cant wait for more soon? so cute !
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