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Post by jessb on Apr 3, 2007 8:03:15 GMT -5
LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic!!!!
The piano part was too cute! I liked the end too when he was like 'youre cute when youre angry'
I like the updates long too haha
Thanks for updating this one so much... I seriously can't get enough of it! Whenever you can get more up that'd be great!
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 4, 2007 23:34:52 GMT -5
"wow im bored" you look down at your scuffiling feet "yer but what else is there to do... nothing" Hannah replys also looking down at her feet you wonder down to the shops and walk into the video store
"so then she was hitting on him even though i was clearly on a date with him and he clearly stated we where dating but of course she didnt notice shes blond and . she puts blond & bimbo into blond bimbo"
you say bitterly piecing up a video and putting it back down
"well i dont realy like her eather and to flirt and hit on your boyfriend when she knows you going out with him what a sleaze im mean who does she think she is shes just doing it because she knows he got a reccord deal"
shes says picking up a video
"what do you think about this one " she says pointing to john tucker must die
"seen it " your reply "when" she looks at you weirdly holding thevideo very close to your face "um that one time ages and ages ago" you say twirling your finger "nahuh you so did not your liying" she puts the video back down "but if thats what you want" "ohh i love this movie" you pick up the fast and the furiouse tokyo drift "me two letts get it" hannah says she grabs it and run to the counter to get it
as you leave you will never guess who you run into yep thats right britney
"ohh well hello" she say giving you the biggest dirty look ever "hello britney" you say in a little boppy tone "what do you want" hannah says bitterly stepping infront of you "ugh what ever" she says rolling her eyes "ugg what everrr!" you repeat mocking her "excuse me" she says not so boppy "excuse me" you mock her in a high pitched voice "what do you think you doing" she moves closerto you "im uhh like mocking youu" you say twisting you hair "well dont" she takes anotehr step back "and what are you gonna do if i dont" you take a step towards her "i'll tell you what im gonna do" befor hannah steps infront of you "why dont you LEAVE!" "how about she doesnt" you move around hannah "JUST LEAVE! BRITNEY" hannah yells "fine Whateverr" she walkes off like a little skank "dont wast you time on that b***h!" she says shaking her head "oh.. ok lets go" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------"hey...yer....um....sarahs......yer....u wanna come ova....ohh ok sure... yer...tokyo drift...awesome...cya....soon"
"yer so berts comming ova to come watch it with us" she smile and come and joins you on the coutch "kool" you reply realy thinking the opisite
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 5, 2007 4:57:48 GMT -5
2 months later "Morning Hun.. what a bagel" Renee says with her nine month old baby belly "sure why not" you reply "cream chess" "defiantly" she hand you your cream cheese bagel "so how was last night i herd Hannah and Bert got into a fight" you sigh "yer but it was nothing they made up later" "OH OK well i was thinking maby we could go Christmas shopping later?" "defiantly and we should get some warm coats and things" you rub your arms "and Christmas bows and bun and oh we need a ham" "yer Renee and we need baby cloths" you both start jumping "yeas!!!" "oh its so exciting" you say rubbing Renee's belly "yer so we gotta get going right we have a Lott's of shopping"renee says grabbing her bag -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"OH so this is so adorable you have to get it" you say holding up this cute little baby's tee that says "cant touch this" its so cute
"but what if its a boy baby people will think I'm making my baby gay" you both laugh "so true.. well lets go get some inch I'm staved" "yer me two ill just go pay for this" "OK" you reply "ill just be out side as you stand there your phone rings your caller id is telling you its teddy "hello teddy" you answer
"hey strander"he says in s deep like voice
"whats going on"
"um nothing just wanted to let you know I'm coming back for the holidays"
"WHAT! you are" you say realizing you just screamed that
"yer i am I'll probably be with My parents most of the time but i guess I'll be able to sprint across the road a few time"
"OH la la i can not wait"
"yer so what r u doin Mrs mysterious"
"just sumthn"
"what sumthn r u you doin?"
"just sumthn, sumthn"
"OH i see what does this sumthn in volve"
"well its my favorite thing to do and it involves comfy shoes"
"in your room lisning to music"
"apart from that"
"ahhh... shopping" teddy says very cheerfully
"yes Christmas shopping to be exact"
"OH have you got a certain some one starting with a t something?"
"OH i dunno wouldt that mean i would have to know some one starting with a t"
"yer but your superpose to be dating this some one who shall remain nameless and name starting with t ist"
" OH well i taught i was going out with john... theodore...geiger...2"
"OH that guy yer iv met him once or twice seems like a decent lad
"ha ha yer hes a spunk"
"yer johns arnt realy my type"
"ha ha well yer.. hey i gotta go renee just came out but call me when you get into town ill strangely drop by"
"ok love you!!! sah"
"yer would you care to tell john i love him too for me"
"will do"
"bye"
"bye"
with that you hang up and go for lunch ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Teddy[/i] "teddy come on wake up we have an album to record" billy says as he pusses teddy "dont make me push you of the bed if there no response im gonna push you off!" billy says as teddy still lyes there like hes dead "OK you asked for it" Band!!!! "AAAWWWWWWW!!!!!! Thats tiles.. NOT SOFT" teddy yell from his new place on the ground "well you asked for it" "asked for what i didnt know i talked in my sleep" "urg come on teddy we have to get to the studio" "we do why cant i just sleep a little more" "HUH?" "sleep" "No teddy get up!" "huh" "ohh wouldyou look at that what a hand bucket of icy cold water" "ok I'm up I'm up"
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 5, 2007 5:28:03 GMT -5
"HE IS OMG!! WHAT THAT IS GREAT! OMG...... TODAY!!...WHAT....WHY.....OHH.....BU THEN HE WILL.... SO HE ISNT....OMG!....YES I CAN NOT WAIT...YER I WILL....OK 10... OK YEP....YEP... OK.... ILL TELL HER OK BYE" with that your hang up
"OMG!! RENEEE!" you screame running into her room "what, what, what is it ill get'm i'll get'm" she jumps up out of bed "ha ha no, no ones hear its just franks comming over here he should be here about 10:00pm so we have to go pick him up at the airprot" "oh ok hunni" she gets back into bed "im glad"she drifts off to sleep ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ you realise you ca no longer go back to sleep so you just wonder out onto your balcony and watch the world
i know that sounds lame but once you have a coffee and a warm blanket its actuall quiet nice you wrap your self up and watch its now 2 days befor christmas how fast the days went it was crazy and your borther only jsut older then you was comming tonight for christmas to see your you hadnt sen im in a few months it was crazy you missed teddy and felt as if you wernt as together that you use to be but in the hopes that, that will all change once the christmas spiret brings you two together hopefully teddy gets to meet your brother for sure they will get along and maby frank will wonna stay
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Post by jessb on Apr 5, 2007 5:58:22 GMT -5
Great update again! Wow you're good I'm glad they get to spend the holidays together! Can't wait for another update!
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 5, 2007 7:44:06 GMT -5
thanks yep asap
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Post by chloe on Apr 5, 2007 8:35:22 GMT -5
dont no if ive said it...but i love this story, and i like how ur bringing in her brother......its should make the story interesting, but i hope he's not like an overprotective one and doesnt like ted.....but anyways more please
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 5, 2007 21:21:18 GMT -5
"SARAH!" your brother says hugging you "hey Franky" you giggle "hey" "OH i missed you" you say giving your brother another hug "same hear but its freezing" he says rubbing his arms "well you get that in winter" you giggle agen "so wheres this boyfriend of yours huh?" "uh.. well hes not back yet." you sigh "BUT HE WILL BE SOON" you say very chipper "ahh... OK isn't he like famous or something thats what mom told me" "mum told you i haven't spoken to mum in like forever"you reply looking confused "yer i think Renee told her" "oh.. OK well nah hes not famous" "oh. what so hes not a singer or anything like mom told me" "well he kind of is i guess" "hey frank wait up" you and frank both turn around as some yells out to frank "OH yer sah I'm sorry i forgot to tell you grant wanted to com for the holidays as well" he shrugs his shoulders "wait, wait, wait stop everything" you yell ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ let me fill you in Frank= your brother he is about hmm.. three months older than you he is the best sweetest brother ever known to walk this earth and has a habit of not being able to say no its a problem hes had since birth Grant=Your ex boyfriend from Australia you dated for about a year maby longer he had extreme feels for you and you sad to admit you feels were not as strong he is nice but a little over protective at times which means that he probably had a reason for wanting to come this Christmas and he probably wants to get back together with you hopefully he will have some one else on his mind it will make things more Fun!.
Renee is about to burst by this i mean baby wise and it would surprise you if she went into labor right now and this means the baby will be born be for on or after Christmas what an unlucky baby this baby boy or girl we don't know they didn't want to know the sex this baby will have a birthday and Christmas at the same time which means all its present will come at once how great like i said its about 2 days be for Christmas and tomorrow it will be Christmas eve hopefully you get to spend some time together these holidays. It hasn't started snowing yet! unfortunately because usually snow makes the holidays feel like well... the holidays anyways lets get back to reality ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------- "hey Grant" you say with your Happy voice on "hey sarah its so nice to see you" he reaches in for a hug "ohh yeah wonderful to see you too grant" you turn and walk to wards Renee "having your baby yet" you whisper "because it would be just lovely" "ha ha well no not as of yet and i am freezing why dont we get going to home i mean" she says rubbing her baby belly "yer lets" you grab w whole bunch of bags and walk in the direction the car along with every one else "so Sarah i herd you boyfriends in the music bis.. so thats kool huh" grant says trying to make conversation "um well yer he kind of is" you reply watching out the window of the car "so where is he i would have thought he would love to meet your brother" he scoots closer to wards you "yer hes with his FAMILY! grant" YOU LOOK AT GRANT THEN BACK OUT THE WINDOW "oh well OK yer i guess that would be so it is the holidays now" "so Sarah has he got an album out, would i have herd of him?" "uh no hes in the process of making his album and no you would have hard of him grant" "OH OK then well" "well?" you reply "well.. i got you a gift" "oh you did how nice of you" "yer but you don't get it till Christmas day" "omg!" if you went in a car you would jump up "i need another present for teddy"
you see be for you only got him some new stuff for his recording studio at home and that wouldn't be enough can you Imagen what his family is probably getting him
"converse.. a new pair" you whisper to your self
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Post by chloe on Apr 5, 2007 22:47:45 GMT -5
omg i just realised that frank is my brothers name lol i read it lyk twice and only just realised........i no im an idiot, but gud update, n wats the deal with grant asking so many questions lol he betta not cause trouble lol. more please
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Post by jessb on Apr 6, 2007 5:47:52 GMT -5
I'm don't know about this Grant guy... sounds like trouble to me. I love this fic and can't get enough! More soon please
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 6, 2007 17:23:11 GMT -5
"Your lucky this is the last pair in this color" the store lady winks at your kinda weird "yer i am" you say as she hands your teddys new blue converse "gotta get to that car or every ones gonna shoot me" [yer so if your wondering its late night shopping just so you know its like you know how they have the christmas deals and there like open till twelve at night yer itlike that and its 10:43 pm and you aske politly if renee could take you to get a prezzie for teddy she sais yes, YES!]
anway you run to the car "hmm.. take your time" frank says putting on his seat belt "well the lady had to ugh.. why am i explaning thsi to you, you dont care" you shuffle in your seat "i do" grant nudges you in the shoulder "hmm.. thats great" the sicasum can be ehrd from a mile "yer so im tyred and would realy like to sleep" renee politly interupt "yer same" you rest your head on the cold window ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ you get inside and run up to your room you hide teddys present in your wardrobe incase he came ova "aahh so warm" you whisper to your self as you snuggle into the blankets just as you start to drift to sleep you phone begins to ring you wernt gonna answer but you thought hm whats the harm "hello" you say in a grunting voice
"hey"
"teddy?" "yep" you can basicly hear him smiling
"hello whats going on"
"um well.. just wanted to tell ya i just got home.. yer and i noticed not so long ago did you..."
"oh yer.. had to pic my brother up from the airport"
"oh your brothers with you how cool i have to meet him"
"yer" you sigh "and his friend grant who is extreamly ugh.."
"oh right well.."
"yer.. so have you got a minet to spare tomoroow coz if you dont i dont mind"
"wel... no but i mite be able to come say hey.. but it would probally be realy late and.. youd probally be asleep, and well im sorry"
you giggle "for what?"
he sighs "well i'll try and come see you"
you smile"hopefully"
"teddy come hear i got something big to show you its fantastic... TEDDY common="
"sarah gotta go"
"ok cya"
"bye"
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Post by chloe on Apr 6, 2007 23:33:19 GMT -5
i wonder what renee is goin 2 hav and what she is goin 2 name it, and i wanna no what was the big thing that was so fantastic that teddy had 2 see-im really intreged with this story lol
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 7, 2007 3:31:21 GMT -5
ha um well names thats a problem renees having trouble firguring out names if its a boy she was thinking derek and if it was a girl peta but there just suggestions tell me what you think and if you have anyidears with names let me know oh and if its geting boring or repetetive tell me k ill change it up
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 7, 2007 7:15:47 GMT -5
Teddy's p.o.v[/b]----------------------------------------------------- "bye" teddy says as he hangs up his phone
"coming mum" he runs into the kitchen
"hey i want you to go clean your room Hun" Lorilyn says wiping the clean dish
"OK mum" he runs up to his room
"oh i had to get off the phone for that" he mumbles to himself
"what is that...ohhh...mum!" he says stroking his brand new wide screen TV thats IN HIS ROOM!
"DON'T YOU LOVE IT!" Lorilyn says jumping
"omg! mum i love it how what uh" he says scratching his head
"well thats one of your Christmas presents but we couldn't really wrap it and put it under the tree now could be" she giggles then heads back down stairs
"wow this is the coolest present ever" he says to his self he walks over to his window he looks out in the direction of Sarah's window
"think its to late to call her... yer she needs her rest" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ mean wile Sarah put her phone on her bed side table and snuggle back into bed and slowly drifts off to sleep
"CHRISTMAS AW, CHRISTMAS AW, CHRISTMAS, AW AW OW i should really stop jumping Christmas eve Sarah wakee wakee" Renee says bouncing into your room as she slowly stops bouncing "ugh.. cant it be Christmas eve after i have had a decent amount of sleep" you say pulling the quilt over you head
"Christmas has no time for sleepy heads.. and we gotta make sure we make it trough Christmas with out no baby bursting" Renee say pulling your quilt off
"huh?" you slowly sit up in your bed
"i don't want to have my baby right now after Christmas" she wines
"and why is that" you slowly creep out of your bed
"because that will make Christmas a hospital Christmas"
"OH wait" you stop in your tracks
"what time is it?" you ask Renee she slowly make her body turn
"um about 7 why?"
"oh yes early" you reply
"early?" Renee asks
"yep gotta go give Teddy's Christmas gifts to his mum to put under his tree be for he wakes"
"oh right coz every one does that Christmas eve morning"Renee giggles
"hey dint mock" you grab you bagged and packed gifts be for heading out your door there is many which makes it a Little of a struggle but it works you knock on the door ad guess who but aj answers
"hey Sarah wow thats some gifts kool any in there for me" he asks letting you in
"there may be a small one" (um yer i didn't mention this be for i didn't feel it was important at the time teddy, aj, Rachel, Lorilyn, john and buddy all have gifts Teddy's is just the biggest est and most expensive oh and yer your still in your pj's)
"kool" he replays grabbing a whole bunch of gifts for you
"all packaged and named only for Christmas morning" you say as aj runs to the Christmas tree and you run after him
"aj are you the only one up"
"only me you and my mum"
"k lets keep this a secret coz i gotta be heading off" you start to run to the door
"oh and aj stay in school" you giggle be for running to your house ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "well no one is doing anything until this food is eaten" Renee sighs
"I'm kidding y'all go shower, computer, text, talk whatever your fun filled teen lives need" she giggles grabbing some dishes
"I'm helping" you spot some plates be for any one else takes them
"well i see theres such a line up to get them I'm happy i got in first" you joke taking the plates in the kitchen
"so whats the name going to be for shim" you giggle stacking the dishes
"shim?" Renee inquires
"shim a cross between and he ans a she shim!" you giggle once more
"right um well where not deciding until we actually see a face otherwise we could be making a big mistake i.e Nicole- if we name if its a girl it that and it has a huge mole or beauty mark on its face Nicole the mole could happen so where just waiting" she sighs rubbing her belly
"ah OK" you giggle ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ 3 House later and 2 Christmas movies later
"wow I'm beat i think its time for me to hit the hay" you finish yawning and walk up stairs followed by many OK, good nigh, have a nice sleep, Mary Christmas's you walk into your room get changed and slide under you quilt, you pick up your phone
1 missed call teddy 6:45 pm time now 11:41
you put down your phone and snuggle into your covers and you hear a buzzing sound "huh.. oh my phone" you flick on the light "hello"
"do me a favor"
"sure teddy"
"i know its late but i thought you should miss out"
"miss out?"
"on the first few flakes of snow!"
"OH kool" you open you window and step out (you sit on OK this is going to be hard to describe its like a big blank patch of nothing stretching out from you window its like where they where going to put a small balcony but they did it attaches to the roof from your fist floor you cant fall off it or anything and it gives you the perfect view of the neighbors garden and also luckily Teddy's window, and house, garden and pool lucky spot hey) Andy way
"hey i see you" you wave at teddy hes windows open with him kinda haning out of it
"wow this is pretty"
"sure is" you reply
"thanks for waking me teddy"
"I'd do it if we went even talking"
" i know you love to watch the snow fall and i love to watch you loving the snow fall and also i ,love it to and i love you so it all works out"
"you what?"
"i know you love to watch the snow fall and i love to watch you loving the snow fall and also i ,love it to and i love you so it all works out"
"you love me"
"of course i do"
"aw teddy i love you too"
you both sit there in silence not an awkward silence the kind of silence that is mutual silence and nice the perfect kind of silence just watching the pretty snow fall matching all the streets Christmas lights and the sound of laughter it seems so perfect
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Post by jessb on Apr 9, 2007 18:33:36 GMT -5
Awww... Teddy is just too cute calling her when it started to snow! Great update! Can't wait for more
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