teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 2, 2007 6:22:54 GMT -5
hey thankyou got anything you want me to put into the story??? And hey you dont know that there together! teheheh! lol
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Post by chloe on Apr 2, 2007 6:27:10 GMT -5
ahhh dont tease..plz tell me they r goin 2 end up 2gether......thats what i want in the story lol
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Post by chloe on Apr 2, 2007 6:30:07 GMT -5
oh oh and they shuld go on lyk a date 2 that house thingy that used to be an antique shop, that can be there hang out and b lyk their special spot....wow im in a romatic mood 2nite lol
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 2, 2007 6:37:17 GMT -5
ha ha well yer its kinda there special spot right now but i think teddys forgotten about it actually but yer they use to hang out there alot
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teddyownsmyheart
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 2, 2007 6:37:54 GMT -5
(wow it feels weired me writing it like that it makes it sound real ha ha)
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Post by jessb on Apr 2, 2007 7:37:55 GMT -5
I absolutely love this fic!!! Amazing updates yet again! Can't wait for more
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 2, 2007 7:38:56 GMT -5
"shes so happy all the time its not funny but in a way its good because it keeps me happy and not too lonely until her and rick go off on some lunch or whatever then I'm left alone agent but you know what ever" you say still laughing
"pass me a brownie teddy" says trying to reach for the brownies
you and teddy well have been in his hospital room for almost 24 hours your just waiting till they give the OK for teddy to leave so you passing the time by eating piles and piles or junk food and share your past and present experiences seening as you two have been out of your loop for a wile
"so how far pregnant is she?" teddy asks shoving a brownie and ice cream teddy made sandwich down his trought
"about 5 or 6 months now" you say taking a sip or you coke
"wow i was gone that long" teddy says looking into space
"well kinda year but i guess the last 4 months or whatever flew by so fast.... hey teddy did you know i have almost been living hear for a year now" you sigh
"relay wow almost a year"
"yea i know its almost Christmas agen time for the snow and cold weather to come" you sigh and look out the window wish a snow flake would fall but you know very well its not gonna happen it didn't even snow in new York last year until 2days AFTER Christmas but it would just be so nice you break the thoughts and silence
"hey teddy remember that old antique store we went to a couple of times"
"year i remember that place i use to go there a lot just after it was abandoned when i was like 10 i use to love and go and sit on the roof do remember when we did that we went up there and you told me all about Australia and when you where little you sue to go down to the beach with your mum and dad your brother and sister and you use to go fishing and then cook the fish on the BBQ all those stories you told me except for the one you wouldn't tell me about" he replays you sigh
"the one about why you had to movie hear in the first place hmm.." teddy laughs "we got about" teddy looks at his WA"4 hours till i can go that should be enough time"
you both laugh "yea just about"
"well.." teddy says point to his watch you giggle
"well the whole reason i left Australia was for 2 reasons number 1 i relay wanted to live hear it just seemed like so much more relay then Australia i dont know how to explain it but its just Australia didn't have anything that wanted me to stay there and i wanted to come hear and live with Renee my step sister shes so kool and every time she came to visit she'd say one day your gonna come live with me and i did and it was the best decision of my life i love living with her shes the best sister and she always knows what to say and I'm glad i came hear because i met Hannah and Hannah is such a good friend to mean and I'd do anything for her and me saying this right now makes me think its weird i have only know her for a year but i would and I'm glad i came because i met you teddy and you told me about your feeling so nows my turn to tell you mine my previous guy friends have never been nice like you have i mean they have been nice but no one i can tell everything to and none of them i have felt about like the way i feel about you because you are so special and you so quiet and nerdy but your so funny and weird and random but these are what make you, you teddy and the way that you sing it just well makes my heart melt and the fact that i have rambling arguments that arnt relay argument because we never get mad at each other and the way you always tell me i look beautiful when i clearly dont and they ways you make me smile the ways you brush my hair out of my eyes i just love to be around you and i miss you when your gone because i have no one i can talk to and have movie marathons with no one to come swimming in my pool with me and no one to come with me when i go to cry at the old antique store roof top and no one to come help me pick what color converse i should get next that why i need you with me all the time and i know you cant be there but i want you to but then agent i know i can survive without you there its just id prefer it." you take a deep breath
"wow that.. at least i got it out right" you sigh but giggle at the same time causing an awkward sound "yer" teddy sighs too
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Post by chloe on Apr 2, 2007 7:49:32 GMT -5
awesome update lol yes the old antique shop was metioned. i dont no y but my fav part was wen she said 'the ways you brush my hair out of my eyes i just love to be around you' i dont no y but it jus seemed so cute and adorable. this fic is amazin.......keep it coming please
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 2, 2007 8:55:03 GMT -5
the nurse comes in "you can leave now at anytime" she check all his monitors and stuff "would you like to leave?" she askers teddy
"um.." he looks at you and smiles "yer"
she brings him the sign release form and checks him out( oh man i mean as in out of the hospital)
the stand both out side of the hospital on the street "so.. where two now?"teddy says looking at his phone "yer?" you say admiring Teddy's phone "hey when did you get that" you say grabbing his phone "what no.. hey no fair" he giggles trying to get it back "I'll give it back if you promise to come with me" you say holding his phone behind your back "come with you were?" he says stooping "the old antique store" you giggle handing him his phone" you sigh "when your done finishing your album"
he stands in front of you staring into your eyes
"remind you of anything" he says still staring "um.. no" you giggle staring back at him (in the eyes) he kisses you you kiss back then he pulls away and runs away around the Conner "NOT RINGING ANY BELLS YET!!" he yells the pops his head around the Conner you giggle and run up to him and playfully punch him "dont be so mean" you say with a big grin plastered across your face "your happy and I'm happy" teddy says taking you hand "come with me i wanna show you something" ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ "where hear he" says knocking on the doors to the studio "how do you know some ones will be in there?" you ask looking up and down the small street "because Billy's always in there" he knocks agent "who come its like a block away from the main part of the city?" you ask still looking up and down the street "oh.. coz that so no one comes peeping and what not" the door opens
"teddy your OK" Felix billy son says giving teddy a big hug "hey Felix how you been doing" he says stepping into the studio still holding your hand like its super glued on not that you mind
"hey Felix wheres your old man" teddy asks looking around the studio "um hes gone out for a lunch meeting with some people" Felix replays ram aging trough a box of girl scout cookies
"hey Ted so whats this thing you wanted to show me?" you say letting go of his hand "oh right" he walkers over to his guitar and picks it up "come take a seat" he points to the big BIG!! couch in front of you and of course you take a seat "OK well i wrote this song a few months back" he says pulling the guitar to wards him
"Wandering the streets in a world underneath it all Nothing seems to be Nothing tastes as sweet as what I can't have Like you and the way that you're Twisting your hair 'round your finger Tonight I'm not afraid to tell you What I feel about you"
he looks up at you then plays, then looks at you agent then plays,
"Oh, I'm gonna muster every ounce of confidence I have Cannonball into the water I'm gonna muster up every ounce of confidence I have For you I will, for you I will"
"Forgive me if I st-stutter From all of the clutter in my head Cause I could fall asleep in those eyes Like a waterbed Do I seem familiar I crossed you in hallways a thousand times No more camouflage I want to be exposed and not be afraid to fall"
you can help but think these lyrics it all was it about you, or was it about Jessica
"Oh, I'm gonna muster every ounce of confidence I have And cannonball into the water I'm gonna muster up every ounce of confidence I have For you I will, for you I will You always want what you can't have But I've got to try I'm muster every ounce of confidence I have For you I will, for you I will"
"For You"
"If I could the lights in the mall and create a mood I would Shout out your name so it echoes in every room I would That's what I'd do That's what I'd do That's what I'd do To get through to you, yeah"
"Oh, I'm gonna muster every ounce of confidence I have And cannonball into the water I'm gonna muster up every ounce of confidence I have For you I will, for you I will You always want what you can't have But I've got to try I'm muster every ounce of confidence I have For you I will, for you I will..."
you take a deep breath "teddy that was beautiful"
mean wile your thinking omg! your a fool this was so about Jessica, she so made him like that he mustered his confidence coz she was so pretty and all omg this was about jessica i know it
"so you liked it" he asks puting his guitar on the chair next to him
"yer it was wonderful i have never herd a song like it before" you say as he grabs your hand "sarah"
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Post by jessb on Apr 2, 2007 9:56:59 GMT -5
Did I say I love your fic? Becuase I do! Another amazing update! It has to be about her... Can't wait for more!
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 2, 2007 21:39:25 GMT -5
What happened next well teddy came back to Rochester for a week it would have the be the funnest week you have had in a wile you did every thing you use to you hung out and everything it was just a blast but the week was over now tonights your last night with teddy because hes going back to the city to start recording agen and yes your are dating Finlay after all this time and now hes going back its sound worse then it is he can call and he will vised ALOT! and its not like hes across the world so.. yer and you just happy for what you got right at the movies watching 300 the new action movie that came out it wasn't your choice but teddy beat you at rock, paper, scissors he got to pick and he chose this and your not really paying attention to the movie your thoughts are over taking and you cant concentrate on the films so the lights turn on it make you jump
"oh its over already ah thats to bad" you say very sarcastically "ha ha right" you both walk out of the movies and start to walk home be for Britney smith oh the most annoying girl on the planet catches up to you both "hey teddy hows it going" she says eye balling your guy!!! "hey Britney" you say bitterly "hi.. so any way teddy are you staying for long i herd about what happened with you and that l.a girl thats just to bad and i herd all about your music contract so your like a singer now how about you sing me a song" she says battering her eye lashes urge.. how rude cant she tell he TAKEN! "um well I'm leaving tomorrow to go back to new York" " oh thats to bad i wanted to see if you wanted to go out tomorrow night" "oh like a date no actually me and Sarah are together so I'm sorry i wouldn't anyway" she looks to the other side of the road oh right well.. why dint we just go hang out now JUST THE TWO OF US so we can catch up" she says grabbing his arm "well i dont think i.." be for you know it she pulling him across the road "what.. teddy but.." he looks at you and mouths sorry you just shrug your shoulders and walk home
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 3, 2007 0:28:29 GMT -5
"OH that stupid girl stealing my boyfriend when hes leaving tomorrow I'm suppose to get his last night with him oh how rude" you say rambling off down the street HM.. Sarah lets take a detour and go to the old antique store go and look at the pretty view or something that mite help lighten you mood you think to your self reusing you just thought to your self in third person ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ you walk in everything still covered in dust you walk to back of the store and Paul on the chain as the big old stair crash down "I'm surprised these still worked" you climb up them and sit down in your usually sitting place its like the perfect place to sit because you can see so far you see the reflection of the moon of Teddy's pool you sit there about half an our just thinking about life about everything it was so nice to just come hear and think it would have to be one of your favorite thing to do when your by your self
and then you hear a crash come from inside the antique store no one new it was hear and the people that did didn't even care you quick run down the stairs to the roof and hide behind and old piano you peep out and see a old stray dog it knocked down one of the boxes "phew its only a little dog" you walk over to the dog "hey little doggy whats your name" the collar read biggles "wow what a cute name I'd better take you to the pound little doggy" you pick it up you look over to the door and you see something stitch to it you walk over still holding the door "hey that says my name on it" you open it it reads Sarah i love you with that i must say open the piano love JTG2
you put down the dog and walk over to the piano and biggles follows you the dog you open the piano it revels a note on the keys
i thank you for my inspiration press the left foot pedal
with that you hit the left foot pedal
the piano started to play a song you had never herd be for its one of those pianos that plays automatically its very old and is extremal out of tune you look down at the note and its says crush whats that so sweet but how did he know i was going to find it
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 3, 2007 0:50:12 GMT -5
you walk into your house closing the door behind you you place your coat on the hook and wonder into the kitchen
"you hungry hunny" Renee says rubbing her belly
"um nah I'm full from the popcorn" you walk over to the kettle and flick it on
"how was the movie sah'" Renee asks sitting down on a stool
"um it was alright not one of my favorites but you get that"
"yer wheres teddy" she asks fiddling with a lose thread on her tee shirt
"out some where with Britney smith ugh.." you say rolling your eyes
"well hell call you later you can count on it" she says now slowley standing and leaving the room
the a light bulb goes off in your head OH i have got to call teddy ask him what all that thing was in the antique store
you run up to your room and grab your phone and jump on the bed you dile his number and wait for an answer
"hello"
"hey teddy"
"Sarah"
"teddy you know that note you left in the antique store"
"well i dunno depends what was it about" he replies with a cheeky giggle
"about this girl called sash shes your inspiration you told her to go over to the piano which the did and she read the other letter as well which told her to press the left foot pedal and she did so but then a song came on but she had never herd this song the name of it was crush or something" she giggles
"oh yer i mite know a little something about that" he replays
"aww.. that was so sweet"
"well what can i say i just have that effect one people sometime" you both laugh
"what are ya doing?" you ask politly
"walking up our street"
"realy... you want me to come meet you?"
"sure " he replys
with that you hand up before running down the stairs and out your front door you sit on your porch
he comes and sits down next to you
"it was called crush you where right"he says wrapping his arms around you
you smile "so what did you do with Britney" you say rolling your eyes
"eh nothing realy just walked around for a bit"
"thats girl will hit on anything that moves" you say in quiet a bitter tone "tell me about it" teddy says sighing
"you mean she like tryed something with you tonight?" you say turning to teddy
"maby" teddy turns to you
"oh that little sk**k I'm gonna whop that little girls ass next time i see her she better watch her..." teddy tint erupts you her kisses you
you break appart "hey" you say snuggleing into his warm hug "your so cute when your Angy" he laughs
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Post by chloe on Apr 3, 2007 2:15:29 GMT -5
wat a cute as up date, omg i luv the part in the antique store with the piano, man i wish there were more teddys like ur story in this world. burt awesome update
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Apr 3, 2007 3:31:13 GMT -5
hey i need help with idears im kinda running out of them but yer when i think of some stuff ill update i'll try to make it big coz when i read fics i like them long so i'll try
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