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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 12, 2007 23:40:02 GMT -5
For Sophie because she's coool :]
pages updated: 1, 2
Originally a HSM fiction
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prologue.
Teddy Geiger was sort of blind.
No, not completely.
He could see the admiration coming at him from wherever he was on the stage. He could see the constant love from his fans. He could see the compassion in his girlfriend Jen’s eyes as she kissed him. He could see the pride in his father’s eyes. He could see the loyalty in his friends. He could see that his life was pretty much perfect, he was on top of the world.
Yet Teddy Geiger was blind.
He walked oblivious to all the problems that surrounded him. He didn’t see what life was when he wasn’t there, even though it was right in front of him all along. He didn’t see the hate that broiled and lashed out at those who were different. Sometimes there were signs, but Teddy didn’t see them.
He didn’t look anywhere else but besides what was coming at him. Everything was coming to help him. He didn’t realize how blessed he was; he took it all for granted. In that way Teddy Geiger was naïve.
He didn’t see anything that didn’t directly help him so Teddy Geiger was blind.
But then, during his senior year, Teddy Geiger began to see things: that the world wasn’t so kind to everybody—that life wasn’t so perfect after all. And then, when that happened, Teddy Geiger saw the world through changed eyes, and he didn’t like it.
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Post by possibilities909 on Feb 12, 2007 23:42:22 GMT -5
captivating.
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Post by possibilities909 on Feb 12, 2007 23:42:39 GMT -5
and yes. im WAY gruel....mean girls anyone?
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 12, 2007 23:42:55 GMT -5
wow that was a good word :] i liked it , haha ... there is rape in this story, just to let you know...
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 12, 2007 23:43:31 GMT -5
and yes. im WAY gruel....mean girls anyone? gruel?
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Post by possibilities909 on Feb 12, 2007 23:51:22 GMT -5
yeah lol its in mean girls...have you seen it? its when lindsay is talking to that one guy she likes, cant remember his name...anyway, and she goes to say great but says cool and ends up saying gruel.
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 12, 2007 23:53:32 GMT -5
yeah lol its in mean girls...have you seen it? its when lindsay is talking to that one guy she likes, cant remember his name...anyway, and she goes to say great but says cool and ends up saying gruel. haha ohhyeahhh :] no one else is readingg; makes me sad.
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Post by possibilities909 on Feb 12, 2007 23:57:34 GMT -5
yeah sometimes it takes a while on these ones. the official boards have more people on them but their more teenie boppers. before, like back this time last year, there were like 20 of us and we were all friends and really close and then i left for a while cuz i was in europe and i came back and i was like...woah. way different. lol i was even one of the founders of the lng. but no one probably remembers me and it deleted all my posts. but anyway, i got way sidetracked. these take longer cuz its not as many people, but theyll catch on, cuz there isnt probably anyone on.
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 12, 2007 23:58:55 GMT -5
^^mmkayy thanks :]
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Post by alyssa duhhh on Feb 12, 2007 23:59:01 GMT -5
fkjshdfa i like it! you should definitley post more, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee. =D
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 13, 2007 0:02:57 GMT -5
fkjshdfa i like it! you should definitley post more, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee. =D mmkay? you think i should update tonightt?
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Post by possibilities909 on Feb 13, 2007 0:06:21 GMT -5
yes! lol tonight!
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 13, 2007 0:08:26 GMT -5
mmkay one update. no more. what color is your hair & eyes?
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Post by jessb on Feb 13, 2007 8:38:26 GMT -5
You should totally update this one b/c so far I can't wait to read more!!!!!
You're an awesome writer!
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Post by smile♥ on Feb 13, 2007 9:25:28 GMT -5
omg.. so good. I can't wait to read more
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