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Post by Catherine on Jun 27, 2007 21:20:41 GMT -5
I totally love this story. I feel it, for sure. It`s amazing, keep it up! Can`t wait for more.
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megan
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medical emergency, baby
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Post by megan on Jul 6, 2007 3:47:22 GMT -5
i love this story. it's amazing. you've got some mad writing skills. can't wait for more :]]
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Ally booo yo [=
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these our the trappings of our years♥
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Post by Ally booo yo [= on Jul 7, 2007 16:11:41 GMT -5
ahh! i love this story. the way you write is amazing. i can't wait for more of this. =]
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chloe
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Post by chloe on Jul 8, 2007 7:54:14 GMT -5
man i totally thought ide posted in this fic but obviously i didnt mayb i did on the official boards anyways L O V E D the update it was so cute and funny you are an amazing writer cannot wait for more
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Post by smile♥ on Jul 8, 2007 15:02:52 GMT -5
ok, so i haven't read any of this in a long time, but it is SO cute. if it were a small child, i would pinch its cheeks and leave a big, bright pink lip print on its forehead like an over weight, aunt who hasn't seen her neice/nephew since the last holiday.
Ok... yeah... anyway..
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jmlove
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Post by jmlove on Jul 9, 2007 0:59:38 GMT -5
sorry this has taken so long, I've had major writers block...and maybee I've also been a smidge lazyy hah. And also sorry it's short, and sorry if it sucks...lol but anyways, enjoy =] comments or critiques are certainly welcome.
9 Teddy stood on my lawn, eyes fixed on me. I pulled my legs up to my chest and let my chin rest on my knees. He seemed to be suppressing a smirk as he began to move paces closer, until he was merely feet below me.
I waited for him, waited for his words to be the first. Instead, I watched as he grabbed hold of the patio table, and shifted it.
He stumbled atop the glass surface, placed my bag beside his feet and surprisingly gracefully pulled himself up by means of the gutter. Teddy adjusted himself and finally sat peacefully, at my side. He shook hair out of his eyes, then turned and smiled
Has your heart ever beat so hard, you think it’s possible that all walks of life can feel it’s vibrations?
“You are quite the scene” He said finally, smirking at me. I hid my face in my legs and muffled my embarrassed chuckles. “Well thanks” I said raising my head, “I try” “You know besides those falsetto notes, your voice was...” He trailed off. “Choose your words carefully.” I said lifting my pointer finger, warning him with a raised eyebrow. He laughed, “Ok ok, I’ll put it lightly and say, interesting” “Fair enough” I said smiling as I nodded my head.
I laid back and let my head rest against the shingles. Teddy quickly did the same.
The sky was barren of clouds, and dusted with stars. I’d never been one for star gazing, and in this moment, I couldn’t understand how I’d felt complete before ever giving the glistening canvas a fair viewing.
Suddenly I could hear the music again, as Where We Gonna Go From Here by Mat Kearney seemed to transition itself perfectly amongst the moment.
“All of your ways and all your thunder Got me in a haze running for cover Where we gonna go from here”
I can’t remember the last time I felt so seamlessly comfortable in silence. My mind was racing, and at the same time, I was in synch with all my thoughts.
After what seemed like an eternity, I felt Teddy shift his eyes towards me. “What are you thinking” He asked blatantly.
I couldn’t help but beam, I don’t think anyone had ever paid enough attention to ask that. Or maybe, it’s that I knew they never cared enough to hear the answer.
“I like this” I said. Three simplistic words, yet my breaths grew more rapidly paced as I said them. I had never been so blunt with a guy. And good riddance, I was done with pre pubescent mind games. They never got me anywhere in the past.
I focused my attention upwards as I gathered a long intake of the crisp air. “And I think I like you.” The words sounded merely childish strung together. But it was as fancy as I could spin them.
He was silent in the moments following. I basked in the rushed beats of my heart, too scared to turn my head and catch his expression.
I was heartbeats away from a heart attack. Granted, it had only been seconds, though my patience tends to wane in such scenarios.
“But, I mean..just don’t even, I was only...sorry if I...” I mumbled as I sat up.
He too sat up and pressed his hand on my knee. As if to stop me from getting up, and walking where? Straight off the ledge?
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Post by jessb on Jul 9, 2007 6:17:33 GMT -5
soooo good i wanna know if he likes her back though but anyways another great update... more soon please?
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chloe
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Post by chloe on Jul 9, 2007 7:15:33 GMT -5
gah amazing i love the way you write it makes me feel like im there please post more
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Post by Carie on Jul 9, 2007 10:32:48 GMT -5
omg does he like her back...i gotta know more?!? please!?
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Post by ohhh ashley on Jul 9, 2007 11:41:39 GMT -5
suspense! i like this chapter alot.
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Post by SiLLySiLLy on Jul 9, 2007 20:39:13 GMT -5
eek! I really really really like this story! Its soo cute!
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teddyownsmyheart
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I'll be the grapes fermented,Bottled and served with the table set in my finest suit Like a perfect
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Post by teddyownsmyheart on Jul 14, 2007 10:50:08 GMT -5
OMG THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD I NEED MORE!!
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megan
Underage Thinker
medical emergency, baby
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Post by megan on Jul 14, 2007 21:02:55 GMT -5
that was a great update! please post more when you have time.
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livelife
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"live life no regrets for the day passes and the moments set."
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Post by livelife on Aug 25, 2007 19:28:25 GMT -5
okay so i know i've been absent from here for lets say a solid six months atleast. but my cicrumstances have not been permitting. so i apologize. vastly. this sorty is amazing im so glad i have had the chance to read it i agree i need more wonderful work i hope you update soon
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jmlove
Step Laddering Up
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Post by jmlove on Sept 18, 2007 14:58:30 GMT -5
ohh my lantaaa it has been so long! hah actually only like 2 months..wow how come it feels like a year?
anywaysss, I totally left this story hanging =/ though it's my senior year...I have loads of time on my hands hah
so if you guys want me to continue..??
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