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Post by Kourtni on Apr 26, 2007 6:12:21 GMT -5
cutee updates.
cannot wait for more!
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Post by hesonmymind on Apr 26, 2007 16:57:51 GMT -5
wow this is such an awesome story. its sad, but kinda cute as well. i cant wait 2 c wat happenes now.
more soon!!!!!
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Post by Catherine on May 1, 2007 18:54:29 GMT -5
Hey guys! Sorry it took so long for the next Stave, I'm working on another fan fic also at the moment. But here's the update for this one! It's going to be very short, because I only have 10 minutes to write it until American Idol is on....JORDIN SPARKS AND BLAKE LEWIS ALL THE WAY!
STAVE 8
"Hey stranger." I said opening up the door.
"Hey. Whats up?" Teddy replied.
"..Umm... have you ever been to my dorm?"
"Yes...it smells...no offense."
"None taken...that's why I'm moving. The people at the office stuck me in this room."
"...sweet," Teddy said. "I'm doing homework if I seem a little distracted..."
"It's fine."
"Okay...Ugh...now I have to type a report.....on the history of how cheese is made."
"Why do we need to know that? It's not like I'm gonna make cheese when I get out of here."
"I know!...Well, anyway.......better write my cheese report."
"Okey dokey." I said as I sat down. Five minutes later I got an IM.
Walk0n916: I see you.
IxGotxMyxPhilosophy: ....I see you...how's your cheese report going?
Walk0n916: Good...good....haha...cheese...that's a funny word...cheese.
IxGotxMyxPhilosophy: ...cheese....what's the point of this? You're right on the other side of the room.
Walk0n916: I know...but this is more fun.
IxGotxMyxPhilosophy: ....yeahhhh.
Walk0n916: I see you... I already said that....but I see you.
IxGotxMyxPhilosophy: and...?
Walk0n916: You are very beautiful.
IxGotxMyxPhilosophy: ...Thank you...*blushes*
Walk0n916: Haha...you really are blushing...because I can see you....
IxGotxMyxPhilosophy: Alright! Stop saying that! And write your cheese report!
Walk0n916: ...fine....ughhhhhhhhh.......................cheese....bahaha.
About an hour after that I heard Teddy shut his laptop and say
"Done.....FINALLY! Did you know it's accually really hard to write about cheese."
"....I can't believe Mr. Sorge made you write about cheese!"
"I KNOW!!! Anyway...the word cheese is starting to sound funny....okay...change of subject. Did you know why there were sirens going off earlier?"
"Yeah....that was Jake," I said as Teddy gave a confused look. "He was arrested."
"SERIOUSLY! THAT'S AWESOME! Well, not for him, but for you it is!"
"I know! Now I don't have to worry about saying the wrong thing to him, because he's not here! I think they're going to put him on bail, though."
"I doubt it. Even if they did, no one would pay to get him out."
"Maybe his mom would."
"After what he did to you? I doubt it."
There was somewhat of a comfortable silence after that, until I put on music. And although Teddy was half asleep, I heard him mumbling the words.
"Where I come from isn't all that great
My automobile is a piece of crap
My fashion sense is a little whack
And my friends are just as screwy as me
I didn't go to boarding schools
Preppy girls never looked at me
Why should they I ain't nobody
Got nothing in my pocket
Beverly Hills That's where I want to be! Gimme Gimme
Living in Beverly Hills...
Beverly Hills Rolling like a celebrity! Gimme Gimme
Living in Beverly Hills," He starting singing. Until it came to the guitar solor when he started to attempt to sing the guitar solo...but it just sounded like a bunch of "nananana's"
"Are you awake?" I said wondering if he was singing in his sleep.
"...kindaaa." Teddy said opening his eyes a little.
"I'll turn this down then...."
"But I like that song..." Teddy said.
"Okay, then I'll turn it up."
"Yeaahhh." Teddy said getting up and walking over to me.
"I thought you were "kinda" sleeping." I said.
"I was, but I'm awake now....excuse my while I burst out into song," Teddy said getting up and running around the room singing to words to "Beverly Hills" by Weezer. "I'm not strange, really I'm not." Teddy said. As we both burst out with laughter, and Teddy said down again. And for a quick second pressed his lips against mine. It was quick...but perfect.
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Post by M!chelle on May 1, 2007 19:45:53 GMT -5
amazing, ive had a couple conversation on aim with my friend 2 feet away too lol
cant wait for more
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Post by jessb on May 1, 2007 20:25:49 GMT -5
i love it! haha cheese... it does sound funny  the aim convo is super cute and i do that all the time with my roomate... even though she's right across the room from me haha great update! more soon please! |
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Post by Catherine on May 2, 2007 15:03:01 GMT -5
i love it! haha cheese... it does sound funny the aim convo is super cute and i do that all the time with my roomate... even though she's right across the room from me haha great update! more soon please! I can't believe a ton of people are all like "OMG this is so good!" Because I'm 12, and I'm not a good writer....i'm just writing fan fictions because everybody else does....LOL!!! |
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Post by M!chelle on May 2, 2007 16:34:01 GMT -5
wow are you serious, you've got something going for you in writting
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Post by Catherine on May 2, 2007 19:57:35 GMT -5
wow are you serious, you've got something going for you in writting Really? I'm only 12! I'm just writing fan fictions because everybody else is!!! ...LOL! |
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Post by jessb on May 2, 2007 20:49:13 GMT -5
you're a really good writer... doesn't matter what age you are keep up the awesome fics... i love em! |
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Post by ohhh ashley on May 2, 2007 21:07:55 GMT -5
yeaa.
this is reallly good :].
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Post by smile♥ on May 2, 2007 22:43:01 GMT -5
good job!
more!
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Post by Catherine on May 3, 2007 20:22:54 GMT -5
Alright peeps, this is how it's goin down (You know you love me when I'm bein all gangsta...) I plan on updating Only In Dreams tomorrow, and possibly this one tomorrow, if it's not updated tomorrow it will probablly be on Sunday. Because when I wake up on Saturday I gotta go rush to the computer to go buy my TEDDY GEIGER TICKETS!! And then I have to go take dance pictures, so it will be updated Sunday, if not tomorrow.
Peace, Love, Hugs, Kisses and all that good stuff,
Catherine.
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Post by jessb on May 3, 2007 21:06:56 GMT -5
can't wait for more!
and i will definitely be sitting at my computer waiting for the tickets to go on sale! haha
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Post by Catherine on May 4, 2007 14:50:00 GMT -5
can't wait for more! and i will definitely be sitting at my computer waiting for the tickets to go on sale! haha Me2, I'm rushing down to the computer as soon as I wake up to buy my tickets! LOL! |
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Post by Catherine on May 8, 2007 18:01:35 GMT -5
I'll try to get some more up tomorrow, i'm not promising anything, but that is my goal.
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