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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 11, 2007 17:00:19 GMT -5
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In society, there's those boys. Those boys who don't give a d**n about you, and don't care if anything happens to you. But there's always an exception.
There's always that Gentleman.
SUMMARY:
You know that kid at every party? The one that ends up crying in the bathroom downstairs? The one who gets drunk or stoned out of his mind and ends up telling anybody his life story even though no one understands a word he`s saying since he`s slurring his words and can`t even see straight? Well right now, I`m running my hands over that pathetic kid`s back and through his tousled hair, trying to calm him down as he sobs into my shoulder. And from what I`ve gathered, his name is Teddy Geiger.
GENRE:
Romance/Angst/Drama
RATING:
PG-13
WARNINGS:
Language, sexual themes, drug use, etc. |
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 11, 2007 17:01:21 GMT -5
if you think i should post it, tell me.
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Post by jessb on Feb 11, 2007 17:41:35 GMT -5
Definitely post it!
It seems so good...and from what I've read so far...you're an amazing writer!
So please post more!!!
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Post by annabelle on Feb 11, 2007 18:58:45 GMT -5
Yeah post more please, I want to read this story ^^
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Post by possibilities909 on Feb 11, 2007 19:44:30 GMT -5
yep! keep going!!  |
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Post by Kourtni on Feb 11, 2007 20:38:54 GMT -5
definitely post! i'm interested in reading.
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livelife
Air Dried
"live life no regrets for the day passes and the moments set."
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Post by livelife on Feb 11, 2007 23:21:26 GMT -5
oh man you should totaly post this im so interested in reading this one
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curlykt
Underage Thinker
I thought I loved you. It was just how you looked in the light...
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Post by curlykt on Feb 11, 2007 23:44:25 GMT -5
This sounds extremely intruiging...and the genre: Angst...yah, that's got my attention...angst...what a great word...I deffinitely want to read this, it sounds cool.
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Post by Glow In The Dark on Feb 12, 2007 2:49:48 GMT -5
Yes post it
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Post by socarryon44 on Feb 12, 2007 16:13:49 GMT -5
Oooh please do!
I saw some from the other boards, and nfjksjnfl...goood
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 12, 2007 20:34:15 GMT -5
ahh nuts.
this board censors.
the other one doesn't.
it won't have the same significance without all the potty words.
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Post by alyssa duhhh on Feb 12, 2007 20:38:29 GMT -5
it won't have the same significance without all the potty words. hahahah i know thats right. |
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Post by smile♥ on Feb 12, 2007 22:07:49 GMT -5
EEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
I'm excited!!
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Post by fallingwithgrace on Feb 12, 2007 22:41:09 GMT -5
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It`s the kind of party everybody goes to. The one that the whole school`s invited to. The one who threw it is Christina Reynolds, the girl who just wants attention. The one who invites a bunch of kids she doesn`t even know and ends up with three times as many kids as she wanted in the house. It`s ridiculous.
I went though. I`m not going to lie. I went to that party because I was afraid to be The Girl Who Didn`t Show Up To The Biggest Party Of The Year. I didn`t believe in anything she stood for, that w****, but who wants to be labeled as the outcast? I didn`t.
So I went. I went to her house with the three stories. I went to the house even though I knew that the punch was going to be spiked, the cookies were going to have drugs mixed in with them, that a lot of kids were going to end up getting laid. I didn`t care. I should`ve, but I`m stupid.
Found some of My So Called Friends and started dancing. Grinding and stuff, no big deal. Some kids were drinking and there were beers and stuff. Some kids had only one, but there were others who drank like five. I knew it was getting too crazy when one girl—Jenna—passed out and a kid named Matt puked on the floor.
It was my bladder that got to me. I had to go so badly; I`d drank a beer—just one—and had enough spiked punch to last me awhile. I stumbled over some kids injecting heroin in themselves and ran to the bathroom. There was a huge line when I got there.
Slapping my way past the kids in the line, I struggled with the door. "Hey, get out, there are kids that need to go here." There was a slight moan and I heard something hit the floor. I knew that something was wrong just from this. I slammed the door and fingered the lock. Slipping a bobby pin into the door, I opened it.
And met him for the first time.
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"So carry on young gentlemen,
I have done all that I can,
I have done all that I`ll stand for,"
-Teddy Geiger`s "Gentlemen" |
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Post by possibilities909 on Feb 12, 2007 23:17:50 GMT -5
so....you know your amazing right? like seriously, i already read more on the other board and you should like write something and publish something cuz its really good. |
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