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Post by Kaylie♥++ on Oct 19, 2006 22:40:19 GMT -5
I think that was so awesomely sweet. Yeah, so none of that was the whatever I thought it would be. Like seriously, I thought Teddy would forget about her and just find some other girl since she was being so weird... Yeah... But it's really good! MORE! Awww.. thanks! <3 Ahaha..aww..yeahh..i'm typing up more right now, I have half a school day tomorrow, so..hopefully I'll get a ton up =D But I just had to post that part, because, everyone would be going crazy wondering what 'whatever' is. LOL =]]
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Post by kellylovesteddy on Oct 20, 2006 6:37:45 GMT -5
wow. that was shocking! haha it reminds me of a walk to remember. moreee soon please
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Post by Ally booo yo [= on Oct 20, 2006 10:06:07 GMT -5
AHH! i did NOT see that coming. at ALL. WHATSOEVER. ohh man i started crying. haha. i seriously neeeeeeed more soon. im addicted.
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Post by dancingteddylover on Oct 20, 2006 10:38:46 GMT -5
wow omigosh that was suh a good cahpter i loved it aw wits so sad cant wiat for more
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Post by Kaylie♥++ on Oct 20, 2006 13:11:57 GMT -5
wow. that was shocking! haha it reminds me of a walk to remember. moreee soon please AWW! I haven't seen that movie yet, which is pretty sad. But, my best friend's aunt had leukemia, so it was something that was like..wow to me, so I decided to put that in =|
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Post by Kaylie♥++ on Oct 20, 2006 13:13:34 GMT -5
yesssssss..and more will be up later =]
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Post by Kaylie♥++ on Oct 20, 2006 18:38:50 GMT -5
Argg..I really REALLY can't think of anything to write..so, i'm not exactly sure when the next part will be up =[[ sorry guys!
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Post by Kourtni on Oct 21, 2006 6:27:13 GMT -5
We'll all still be waiting for the next update Kaylie! I'm sure it will be amazing and well worth the wait!
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Post by Kaylie♥++ on Oct 21, 2006 22:14:06 GMT -5
Okayokay, so I was really busy today but after my friends giving me a couple of ideas, I started the next part again, well I had SOME done, but I didn't like it.
So um, more..tonight? or tomorrow morning..=]
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Post by Kaylie♥++ on Oct 21, 2006 23:19:07 GMT -5
Okayyy! So it's pretty short..and umm it's pretty lame..to me, but...it has to be written sooner or later..anyways, hope you guys don't exactly hate it! LOL
Chapter..6? LOL I forgot what chapter this is..uhh yeah. =]
"You know you'll have to tell him sooner or later..riiigggghhhttt?" my brother told me as he spun around in my chair I glared at him "When did YOU start giving such advice?" He shrugged "Dunno." "...well, i'm not going to tell him, he'll never know.." he stopped spinning and looked me in the eye like he was about to get really mad or something "He'll find out." he smiled and started spinning again. I rolled my eyes "Or...I'll tell him right now.." he picked up the phone and started to punch in Teddy's number I shrieked and grabbed the phone away from him. "No, no, noo..you can't do that." He crossed his arms and stared at me again "You tell him. Or I will." I glared at him "You're a horrible person.." He laughed at pointed to the door.
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I slowly walked out of my house, towards Teddy's house. "HURRY UP! I'M WATCHING YOU!" yelled my brother from my doorway I walked and turned the corner so my brother couldn't possibly see where I was. My cell phone started ringing, 'home'?! "Yesss?" "I'M WATCHING YOUUUUUUUU!!!!" I rolled my eyes and hung up on my brother.
Finally, Teddy's house. I thought about this for a moment. Do I really want to tell him?
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I slowly walked down the stairs to his basement. My hands were shaking like crazy and I was getting really nervous. I felt like I was going to throw up. I can just turned around and go home. He doesn't have to know. Oh, why did Matt make me come?!
I stopped and listened.
"..I'll just wait and see So I'll just wait and see let our eyes say words we'll leave unspoken while we're trying to be careful
and words can be so, confusing while we're trying to be careful.."
I turned around and started walking up the stairs, slowly, hoping not to make a sound.
My phone started ringing. Oh no.. I covered the speaker on my phone and ran.
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I covered my head with my hands as I sat on our favourite park bench, the most amazing place in the world. My phone rang again "Haylie..it's Erin.." "Hi.." "I sort of..told..Teddy that--"
Teddy sat down next to me. I slowly closed my phone, unknowingly hanging up on Erin.
"Hi!" I said, cheerfully He looked at me and his eyes were red "Why didn't you tell me?" he whispered I shook my head "Because I couldn't.." He shook his head and grabbed my hand "Tell me it's a lie." "I wish...I honestly, honestly wish.." Teddy looked at me, tears on his face. "I love you..so, so much.." he whispered as I wiped away his tears.
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I slowly opened my locker. Still paranoid while thoughts ran through my mind.
Erin walked up to me carrying a pile of book "I'm sorry..I didn't mean--" I shook my head "It's okay..you were probably just..trying to help.." she dropped her books on the floor and gave me a hug, Max ran up towards us and hugged us, "AWWW GROUP HUG!" he giggled I laughed, "You're pretty crazy, Max.." He smiled "Then, does that give me a chance with you?"
I smiled and suddenly Teddy popped up from behind me "Sorry buddy, she's mine." Teddy pulled me towards him, I looked at Erin and her mouth hung open.
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The rest of the day, I was stuck with Erin, while she kept giggling each time I looked at her. "Stop it." I laughed Her face finally got serious "When did you take my advice and gave Teddy a chance?!" I thought about this "It wasn't YOUR advice that I took......okay it sort of was. BUT..my brother..sort of convince me.." "Then when did your brother have such a huge impact on you?" I shrugged "He's not so bad.." Erin tapped her fingers on the desk "..have you ever thought..that you might come out of this, okay?" I shook my head "I doubt it, and giving myself hope..isn't good at times." Erin opened her mouth to say something else but got interrupted by the teacher calling out her name.
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Post by alyssa duhhh on Oct 22, 2006 8:53:16 GMT -5
that was goooood!
moreeeee!!
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Post by Kourtni on Oct 22, 2006 9:29:43 GMT -5
aww, i liked that! it was really good! keep up the good work!
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Post by kellylovesteddy on Oct 22, 2006 13:17:25 GMT -5
i love it!! cant wait for more
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Post by Carie on Oct 22, 2006 14:09:51 GMT -5
awww.....i love it more!?
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Post by smile♥ on Oct 22, 2006 14:16:30 GMT -5
Aww... I like that "sorry buddy, she's mine." Very cute.
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